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The Ace of Jonas [a Kevin FF!] Chapter SEVILLYDEVEN!!!! 9/22 VOTE! NEW FF!!! READERS NEEDED!!!=) 
Modified By aimée sanoj :) {youre never fully dressed without a smile!}  on 9/22/2008 7:36:54 PM)

what do you want to happen?  at then end of every chapter im gonna give you two or three choices! (starting after chapter 3)  whichever choice gets the most votes, will be chosen, and yalls decisions affect the outcome of the story.  they might be simple questions like, "should she buy this drink, or this drink" or something more complicated like "should she kiss kevin, or not?"  so.... GET COMMENTING PLEASE!!!! i shall write chapter 3 right now!

 

oh, and please do not just read, and not comment, remember! spencer's future is in your hands, and every vote counts!!

 

okay, so this would be my first FF on my own, and im gonna try to complete it.  im pretty sure that it will be terrible, but its gonna be fun!

 

so.. without further ado, TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!! (and dont judge it by the prologue.. it gets better i promise!!

 

PROLOGUE!!!

 

                   "SPENCER!!" Mary Alice called from across the bakery.  We have a delivery! It’s urgent, due in two hours. You think you can make it?"

            This would be my enjoyable life working the one and only, Charm City Cakes. No, I don’t have some spectacular job decorating cakes, and stuff, but it pays the bills, and Duff is good to me.  The joys of being a delivery girl.  My favorite thing to do is sit around and watch Geof, my cake hero, create masterpieces out of cake. Someday I hope to be able to decorate cakes for the business too, but I guess that’s what you get when you’re an intern coming from your 2nd to last year of college. But working at Charm City Cakes isn’t such a drag; it’s inspiring, and brings out the child in you.  Life in Baltimore, on the other hand, well that’s nothing special.

            I picked up the keys to the white cake van, and set of with a very important cake, for whom, you ask? I had no idea.

 

 

-Aimée

 

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New Post 8/17/2008 2:40 AM
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ooo nice!!!

dude yay for living in b-more!!! (its quite a rockin city if i do say so! i spend alot of time there :D)

and you need to pms girlie!!!please :)


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New Post 8/17/2008 2:42 AM
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 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ Kevin} wrote

ooo nice!!!

dude yay for living in b-more!!! (its quite a rockin city if i do say so! i spend alot of time there :D)

and you need to pms girlie!!!please :)

 

im gonna have to do some reasearch...... cause quite frankly, i know NOTHING about baltimore. at all.

 

workin on it!


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 °•aimée•° wrote

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ Kevin} wrote

 

ooo nice!!!

dude yay for living in b-more!!! (its quite a rockin city if i do say so! i spend alot of time there :D)

and you need to pms girlie!!!please :)

 

 

im gonna have to do some reasearch...... cause quite frankly, i know NOTHING about baltimore. at all.

 

workin on it!

haha i can help u if ya need it!!

and awesome :)


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New Post 8/17/2008 2:44 AM
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Re: The Ace of Jonas [a Kevy FF!] PROLOGUE! [[NEW FF!]] 

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ Kevin} wrote

 °•aimée•° wrote

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ Kevin} wrote

 

ooo nice!!!

dude yay for living in b-more!!! (its quite a rockin city if i do say so! i spend alot of time there :D)

and you need to pms girlie!!!please :)

 

 

im gonna have to do some reasearch...... cause quite frankly, i know NOTHING about baltimore. at all.

 

workin on it!

 

haha i can help u if ya need it!!

and awesome :)

 

please do.  *big puppy dog eyes*


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New Post 8/17/2008 2:47 AM
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 °•aimée•° wrote

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ Kevin} wrote

 

 °•aimée•° wrote

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ Kevin} wrote

 

ooo nice!!!

dude yay for living in b-more!!! (its quite a rockin city if i do say so! i spend alot of time there :D)

and you need to pms girlie!!!please :)

 

 

im gonna have to do some reasearch...... cause quite frankly, i know NOTHING about baltimore. at all.

 

workin on it!

 

haha i can help u if ya need it!!

and awesome :)

 

 

please do.  *big puppy dog eyes*

well whatcha wanna know??


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Re: The Ace of Jonas [a Kevy FF!] PROLOGUE! [[NEW FF!]] 

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ Kevin} wrote

 °•aimée•° wrote

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ Kevin} wrote

 

 °•aimée•° wrote

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ Kevin} wrote

 

ooo nice!!!

dude yay for living in b-more!!! (its quite a rockin city if i do say so! i spend alot of time there :D)

and you need to pms girlie!!!please :)

 

 

im gonna have to do some reasearch...... cause quite frankly, i know NOTHING about baltimore. at all.

 

workin on it!

 

haha i can help u if ya need it!!

and awesome :)

 

 

please do.  *big puppy dog eyes*

 

well whatcha wanna know??

anything. whats your pm name thing? this would be easier if it wasnt on the thread.....


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Ugg, my internet is being a butt.

I want to do to Charm City Cakes.

I watch Ace of Cakes, but I've never been to the place.

I should go there. I mean, I live like a half hour outside of Baltimore.

But I think it'd be odd if I went in a didn't order anything...

Anyway, post more soon!


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New Post 8/17/2008 3:34 AM
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CHAPTER 1!!!! I KNOW! EEEEKKKKK!!!!! no, not really, its a pathetic lilttle chapter, a mere 766 words. not very beastly, im so sorry. also, a filler. im very sorry. so here we go!-

 

Chapter 1:

            I walked outside the building, escorted by none other than Duff, carrying this ‘Oh so important cake’ that I did not know to whom it was going.  My only hints were that it had a giant superman symbol next to a health kit, with some tape that said ‘DANGER’ on it.  And that was getting me nowhere. 

            I climbed into the driver’s seat of the car, and cranked the radio on my favorite XM station, 20/20.

            ‘You gotta live to party

            bust your move

            everybodys in that groove

            tell the the DJ to play my song

            are you ready to rock and roll?’

I sang along with the familiar tune, it was one of those songs that could get you pumped up for anything, even a three hour opera.  I never cared to figure out who sung it, but I could faintly remember hearing who it was…

            I’ve got a friend my friends calling me yeah-eh-eh-eh-eh you haven’t got one no-ee-ah my friends calling me, yeah calling me on my phone haha I got a friend my friend loves me my friend wants to talk to me you aint got no friends like this no, heh-heh-heh-heh-heh. My best friend Lanie was calling me.  Lanie has straight, dark brown, almost black hair comes to the middle of her back, her gorgeous blue eyes, which I would kill to have any day, and a personality that was contagious.  Her trim, skinny figure would never hint the amount of food that she ate, or her lack of exercise.  I wished I could look like her, my shoulder length frizzy brown hair, and mud brown eyes weren’t exactly my favorite feature.

            “Ello girly!” I answered.

            “HEY!!! SPENCE!! GUESS WHAT!!!” she shrieked.  I knew that this was probably something to do with the Jonas Brothers, Lanie’s favorite band as of three years now.  I sat there listening to her ramble on while maneuvering my way through the traffic jammed Baltimore streets.  I was trying to remember the names of the three boys.  I knew one of them was Joe, Lane’s favorite by far. All I ever heard was useless information about Joe.  It was like a broken record, Joe likes ______, Joe likes ______, Joe likes ______, THAT’S JOES FAVORITE (insert some random thing here) TOO!!!  It was beginning to get on my nerves. 

            “Spence? Speeeeeennnnceee? Spencer? SPENCER ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING TO ME?”

            “Oh wait, what?” I was snapped back to reality.

            “I KNEW YOU WERN’T! wait.. put me on speaker, I HEAR JONAS!!!!!” So that’s who sung this song! Now wonder… I clicked Lane onto speaker, and turned the music up a bit more, hoping to distract her from asking what I was thinking about. I have to face it.. I like a Jonas Brother, too.  The oldest, Kevin, he’s extremely cute, and his smile is infectious, I man, can you blame me?  I don’t know one person on the face of this earth that can look at that boy’s smile and not smile right on back to him.  And his curly brown hair, something I had always wanted, was a temptation. His eyes were what made him stand out from his brothers to me.  He has some of the prettiest eyes I have ever seen.  A glowing warm hazel, that sucked you in at one glance.

            “So… what were you thinking about??” Lanie finally asked after singing, very obnoxiously along with the Jonases.

            “Nothing. Just, trying to figure out who this cake is for.”

            “Uh huh, sure.  Spence, just come out and say it, you’re a closet Jonas Brothers fan. ADMIT IT!!!!” she then continued to taunt me with ‘Spencer likes Kevin’ over and over.  How did she even find that poster in my room? Oh wait, I forgot, that must be one of the things that comes with having ‘OJD’ you can sniff a poster, wherever it might be, from at least three miles away..  Boy, I hope I NEVER get like that.  And plus, I really was wondering about who the cake was for.

            “SHUT UP LANIE!!!!!!!!! YOU KNOW I DON’T LIKE THEM!!!!! I simply, tolerate them, and nothing more.” I yelled jokingly. 

            “Oh, well fine then, Mrs. Paul Kevin Jonas II!”  So that was his full name. “What does the cake look like? I wanna help! You know that ‘Mystery Cake’ is one of my favorite games!”

            “Too bad Lanes, looks like I’ve just arrived and location X. I’ll talk to you later? Okay? Bye!!”

            “BYE SPENCE!! Don’t forget to tell me who the cake is for!!!”

            “I won’t don’t worry Lanie! Bye!”

 

 

-sugguestions? comments? concerns? reactions? I LOVE TO HEAR THEM ALL.

 

-aimée


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