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New Post 8/17/2008 2:36 PM
User is offline Katay Jonas :]
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When you looked me in the eyes....(Nick FF) 

Hi everyone this is my first ff and I want to know what you guys think of it. If you like it, I'll write more.

When you looked me in the eyes....

Chapter 1

Katie's POV

"Amanda, you ready?" I yelled. "Almost!" She yelled. I was so excited. It was our first Jonas Brothers concert. We had made custom shirts for the event. "Kay, ready." Said Amanda as she walked into my room. We had done our hair and makeup so we would hopefully get noticed by Nick, Joe or Kevin since we were in the front row. My parents drove us to the concert and we listened to their album the whole way there. "OMJ, AMANDA!!!!!!! LOOK!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S THEIR TOUR BUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I screeched and pointed out the window as we passed the bus to go into the ramp. "OMJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Amanda screamed. I rolled down the window and we both yelled "WHOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" out the window and pointed to the tour bus. It took forever to get into the ramp. "Come on! Come on!" Yelled Amanda. "We're going to be late!" "Relax, it's 6, they don't even come on until 8." Said my dad. "HOW CAN WE RELAX?!" Me and Amanda yelled at the same time. We finally parked and got out of the car, grabbed our signs we had made out of the trunk, linked arms and ran full speed to the skyway. Oh and did I mention this is in February and we were wearing t-shirts and no jackets? "FREEZING FOR THE JONAS BROTHERS!!!!!" I yelled. We were out of breath by the time we got there and almost ran into a couple of little JB fans. We walked past security guards and they looked at our posters and smiled. "Those boys sure are big aren't they." One said to the other. "Oh yes." Said the other. Me and Amanda looked at each other and grinned. We walked in and the place was PACKED! We could barely walk through the narrow hallway but managed to squeeze through. We hid our cameras going through security so we could capture Joe, Nick and Kevin's famous "Goodnight and Goodbye" dance. We saw stand selling JB stuff so we ran and got in line. We got posters and tour t-shirts and made our way to our seats. Me and Amanda chatted excitedly, bringing up random facts about JB. Finally around 8 Rooney left the stage and they started setting up for JB. They started playing a song and the curtain dropped revealing the band. Girls screamed, me and amanda along with them, then started chanting: "JONAS BROTHERS!" Finally, we see their heads rise up out of the stage and the place goes crazy. Me and Amanda jumped up and started screaming our heads off. They started playing "Kids of the Future" and had everyone dancing. When they were done with that they introduced themselves. We screamed. They played a few more songs. Then they played "When You Look Me In The Eyes". "Yes!" I said. Nick sat on the piano bench and started playing it. "When you look me in the eyes, I catch a glimpse of heaven..." He sang and looked me in the eyes. I was mesmerized, the intensity of his deep brown eyes capturing me, making me melt. I swear he stared into my eyes for a good 30 seconds. I almost fainted but Amanda caught me before I fell. "What happened?!" She asked me. "Ni-Nick...looked me in the eyes...." "Okay...?" She said and looked back at the stage. I couldn't take my eyes off of Nick. Then came Nick's song, "A Little Bit Longer", about his diabetes.  I cried along with everyone else. Nick cried too. Man he's so amazing. They walked off the stage. Murmurs filled the room. "What about S.O.S..." People whispered. Joe came running back and started singing "This is an S.O.S...don't want a second guess....this is the bottom line it's true..." Then held the mic out for us to sing. We finished the chorus and Nick and Kevin came out and started playing the music. Nick started singing. Every time the chorus played, Joe would jump and when Joe jumped, EVERYONE jumped. Nick sang the last note and they waved, blew kisses and thanked everyone. Me and Amanda looked at each other. We pulled little pieces of paper out of our pockets with our cell numbers on them and threw them on the stage. Mind landed near Nick, he looked down and looked at me and smiled. I smiled back. They went up to the very top of the stage and went down through the stage. The lights came on. We walked out of the auditorium and walked through the mess of people. We finally got to our car and me and Amanda looked through the program. "I'm slipping into the lava...and I'm tryin' to keep from goin' under..." Sang my sidekick. Everyone looked at me with question. It was late and it was a school night. I shrugged. "One new text message." It said. I flipped open my phone. I clicked "read message". "Oh. My. JONAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I screeched. "What?!" Everyone asked. I read the message aloud. "Hey this is Nick Jonas."

 

Soo let me know what you think. I have to go now but I'll check in about an hour or so. Thanks! See yah later. (:


My guys: Nick Jonas Joe Jonas Kevin Jonas David Archuleta Edward Cullen Robert Pattison <3 8/12/08= AMAZING! 11/11/08= Amazing! 11/21/08=Amazing.
 
New Post 8/17/2008 5:36 PM
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Re: When you looked me in the eyes....(Nick FF) 

That was soo good! I loved it!!

I can't wait for more!!

Pweaaase post more SOON!


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New Post 8/17/2008 10:28 PM
User is offline Katay Jonas :]
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Re: When you looked me in the eyes....(Nick FF) 

YAY! I HAVE A READER! glad u liked it. (: I'll be posting more soon.


My guys: Nick Jonas Joe Jonas Kevin Jonas David Archuleta Edward Cullen Robert Pattison <3 8/12/08= AMAZING! 11/11/08= Amazing! 11/21/08=Amazing.
 
New Post 8/20/2008 7:49 PM
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Re: When you looked me in the eyes....(Nick FF) 

Hi! Sorry it took me so long to get the next chapter up, been busy. But let me know what you think! (:

When you looked me in the eyes....

Chapter 2

Katie's POV

 

This person texting me could not be Nick Jonas. "Is this really Nick Jonas?" I texted back. Amanda stared at me in awe. "Is it really him?" Asked my mom. "I dunno..." I replied and my phone went off again. "Decide for yourself." It said, just as I read that, my phone started ringing. The phone number was the same one I got the texts from. 'Is it him?!" Asked Amanda. I nodded. "Should I answer?" I asked. "Yes you dummy!" Shouted Amanda and pressed the talk button for me. I raised my shaking hand with my phone in it up to my ear. "Hello?" I said. "Hi." Came a voice on the other line. This was definitley Nick Jonas. I put my hand over the speaker and screamed. "Sorry, hi." I said. "Hi." He said. "This is the girl with the brownish blondish hair in the front row right? The one who kind of fell and the one who threw me her number?" "Y-yes." I said. "Awesome." He said. "You're really hot." I blurted. He laughed and said "Thanks, you're really pretty." I was speechless. Did Nick Jonas just say I was really pretty?! "Thank you" I said in awe. "You're welcome." He said. "So, we aren't heading out of Minneapolis until Friday, I was just wondering....do you wanna go to dinner or something?" Nick asked. "Excuse me." I said. 'OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I screamed. "Sorry, I'm back." I said. "So, do you wanna?" He asked. "Um when?" I asked. Ugh, why didn't I just say yes?! My mouth seems to have a mind of it's own. "Um, how about tomorrow night?" He said. "Sure!" I said. "Cool, I'll pick you up around seven?" He asked. "Okay, cool!" I said. "Sweet, I'll see you tomorrow." He said. "Okay, bye." I said. "Bye." I pressed the end button. Just now I realized we were stopped on the side of the road. "Ummm, was I really screaming that loud?" I asked. My dad laughed. "Yes you were." "What was the screaming all about?" My mom asked. "Nicholas Jerry Jonas asked me out!" I yelled. "OH MY GOSH!!!" Yelled Amanda and hugged me. "Who said we were going to let you go?" Said my dad. "What?" I asked in a small voice. "I'm just kidding." He said. "Oh my gosh thank you." I said, feeling relieved. We pulled back onto the road. "Amanda, you're coming home on the bus with me tomorrow, so is Melanie." "Of course!" She said. "Okay, you'll need to help me get ready so bring all of your makeup over." "Kay." She said. I texted Melanie. She texted back. "OH MY GOSH!" She said. "Yup, so you're coming over and helping me get ready." I texted back. "Of course!" She said. "Kay, details tomorrow." I texted back. "Kay, bye." She said. We pulled up to Amanda's house. "Remember, bus ride home with me tomorrow." I said as I hugged her. "Yup, thanks for taking me to the concert." "You're welcome." I said. We watched her walk up to her house and pulled out of her dirveway. "So how excited are you?" Asked my mom. "MAJORLY!!!!" I said. My parents laughed. I got in the house, ran into my room and screamed at the top of my lungs. I looked at all of my Nick posters and sighed. I got changed into my pajamas and crawled into my bed. I was so excited! "When I grow up, I wanna be famous, I wanna be a star." Sang my alarm. I groaned and hit the snooze button, but then I realized that tonight I had a date with Nick Jonas. I threw off my covers and ran to the bathroom to take a shower. I got ready and headed to my bus. I sat down next to my best guy friend, Joey. "Hey." I said. "Heyy." He replied. Just then my phone vibrated. I flipped it open. It was from Nick. I smiled "Hey, what's up?" Said the text. 'Going to school." I texted back. "Okay who is he?" Asked Joey. "Nick Jonas." I replied grinning. "Mhm, yeah right." He said. "It is! I'm going out with him tonight." "Yeah okay.." He said. I called Nick. "Talk to my bff, he doesn't believe I know you." "Okay." Nick said. I handed the phone to Joey. He talked for him a bit, he was in shock. I stuck my tounge out at him and said "Told you so." He handed my phone back.

Me: Okay, hi.
Nick: Hey, you excited for tonight?
Me: Of course!!!!
Nick: Good, we're going somewhere semi-formal, so you don't have to like wear a dress.

Me: Hahaha, okay. Oops, I'm at school so I gotta go.

Nick: Okay, see you later.

Me: Yup see yah.

I hung up and got off the bus. I was walking on air. I ran up to Amanda and Melanie. "You excited?" They asked. "No, not really...OF COURSE I AM!!!!!!" They laughed. I could barely concentrate through my classes but mangaged to make it through the day. Me, Amanda and Melanie walked to my bus with Joey. We got on my bus and we all chatted excitedly. We got to Joey's stop. "Don't have too much fun tonight Katie." He said. "Yeah...okay." I said and waved. He laughed and waved. We got to my house and started working on my wardrobe. "He said it was semi-formal." "Okay." Said Mellie. "This sweater is perfect." Said Amanda. "And so are these jeans." Said Mellie. I put them on. "You guys are right, I look good in these!" They laughed. "Now, hair." Said Amanda. They flatironed my normally wavy hair. "Perfect!" I said. Now makeup. They put on black eyeliner, black mascara, a little blush and a little eye liner then some soft pink lipgloss. "You look amazing!" Said Amanda. "I agree." Said Mellie. I looked at myself in the mirror. "You guys did a great job!" I said. "Thank you." They said and bowed. I looked at the clock. 6:55. "He's going to be here any minute!" As soon as the words left my mouth, the doorbell rang. My heart fluttered. "Have fun!" They said. "I will." I said and smiled. I put on my winter jacket and walked to my doorway and opened the door.

 
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