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New Post 8/17/2008 3:23 PM
User is offline Libby♥ team Joe AND Taylor
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Cartwheels (Chapter 6- 8/27) 
Modified By Libby♥  team Joe AND Taylor  on 8/27/2008 11:55:32 AM)

Prologue

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I stared out the window. When would he come? He had promised and now he was breaking his promise. It wasn't fair how guys always did that. They always disappointed me. No one knew what I had to go through everyday. No one knew the truth. Yet, they still had the nerve to stand me up. I saw him approaching. I locked the door and closed the curtains on the windows. He was too late. It was time to move on.

-Libby

what'd you think? This prologue is in the future... and the chapters are gonna start from the past and work up to this prologue. It will be kinda sad, but i hope you guys comment!


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New Post 8/17/2008 3:25 PM
User is offline ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥♫hopes you don't forget about her♫♥}
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ooo i like it!!

if u need anyone...i volunteer lol :)


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New Post 8/17/2008 3:26 PM
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 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ concert 2morrow!!} wrote

ooo i like it!!

if u need anyone...i volunteer lol :)

thanks. and ha ha sure i'll squeeze you in :) Sadly enough, I still don't know which Jonas is the main... er I'll think about it while i eat :P


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New Post 8/17/2008 3:32 PM
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I like it! PMS

please!

-Tanjie


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New Post 8/17/2008 3:40 PM
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 JonasLove [=Tanjerines=] wrote

I like it! PMS

please!

-Tanjie

ok :) If i get a couple more comments I will. oh, and you were reading Sweet Treats, right? Well... I really didn't like where that fanfic was going, so unfortunately i dropped it :(

But look on the bright side, that's why I have this one! :)


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New Post 8/17/2008 3:45 PM
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Re: Cartwheels  

*drops in* 'Ello. Just thought I'd come and review. Sounds interesting, this story. I like it! Keep going, if you please =)


"I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every second of it." Check out the fics: Hollywood High [N, Completed] Remember Him [N, Sequel to Hollywood High] If I Fell [J, Joint w/ Katie aka FantasyParade]
 
New Post 8/17/2008 3:47 PM
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Re: Cartwheels  

 Libbayyyyy [Hawkgirl <3's Nick]{August 24th!!!} wrote

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ concert 2morrow!!} wrote

 

ooo i like it!!

if u need anyone...i volunteer lol :)

 

thanks. and ha ha sure i'll squeeze you in :) Sadly enough, I still don't know which Jonas is the main... er I'll think about it while i eat :P

haha rockin :)

and ooo food...i need to eat...thanks for reminding me!!


Photobucket thanks jenny [: Photobucket Photobucketthanks ari and momo!
 
New Post 8/17/2008 3:54 PM
User is offline Libby♥ team Joe AND Taylor
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Re: Cartwheels  

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ concert 2morrow!!} wrote

 Libbayyyyy [Hawkgirl <3's Nick]{August 24th!!!} wrote

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ concert 2morrow!!} wrote

 

ooo i like it!!

if u need anyone...i volunteer lol :)

 

thanks. and ha ha sure i'll squeeze you in :) Sadly enough, I still don't know which Jonas is the main... er I'll think about it while i eat :P

 

haha rockin :)

and ooo food...i need to eat...thanks for reminding me!!

no prob. But I do have a problem: I can't choose a Jonas. I haven't done a Kevin fanfic yet... except one of mine was kinda Joe/Kevin... i wanna do Nick.... but I've done like all Nick except for maybe 2 fanfics. This is harder than I thought. grrrrr. You'll find out who i choose later.


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New Post 8/17/2008 4:01 PM
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Re: Cartwheels  

 Libbayyyyy [Hawkgirl <3's Nick]{August 24th!!!} wrote

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ concert 2morrow!!} wrote

 

 Libbayyyyy [Hawkgirl <3's Nick]{August 24th!!!} wrote

 ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥ concert 2morrow!!} wrote

 

ooo i like it!!

if u need anyone...i volunteer lol :)

 

thanks. and ha ha sure i'll squeeze you in :) Sadly enough, I still don't know which Jonas is the main... er I'll think about it while i eat :P

 

haha rockin :)

and ooo food...i need to eat...thanks for reminding me!!

 

no prob. But I do have a problem: I can't choose a Jonas. I haven't done a Kevin fanfic yet... except one of mine was kinda Joe/Kevin... i wanna do Nick.... but I've done like all Nick except for maybe 2 fanfics. This is harder than I thought. grrrrr. You'll find out who i choose later.

haha ok i can't wait to find out :) *waits patiently while eating her taco* 
ooo maybe i'll go update my blog...hmmm
or oneshot idk...


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New Post 8/17/2008 4:17 PM
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I chose a Jonas :P lol.

Chapter 1

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"Say it!" I screamed at him. "Ok, fine, you're the prettiet girl I've ever seen," he gasped. I nodded and got off of him. "Why did you tackle me?" he asked. "Because I wanted to hear you say that. One way or another," I smirked. "Ohhh... you're soo dead!" he shouted, chasing after me. "Nick! Chels! Time to go!" Kevin's voice called. I sighed. "Do you have to go on tour?" I asked him, my eyes pleading. "Yup. Sorry, Chels, but we can't disappoint our fans," Nick responded. I thought I saw sadness in his eyes. Tears began to form in my own. "You're the best friend I've ever had, Nicholas Jerry Jonas," I said mournfully. "Dude! I'm not dying. But, Chels, you're the best friend I've ever had, too," he replied. I hugged him. "I love you," I whispered in his ear. "Huh?" He asked, looking confused. "Oh! Nothing. I love everyone. Remember? I'm gonna miss you, Nick," I said, trying to recover from the last thing I'd said. "Don't stop turning those cartwheels. You'll make it to the Olympics someday," he joked. "Yeah, right. I'm not a gymnast, I can only cartwheel!" I said, taking him seriously. He laughed. "I'll see you around sometime," he said. "Yes, you will. I'm buying tickets to the next show you have here," I replied, smiling sadly. "OK, I'll see you there," he said and winked. He walked to their bus and waved at me. I waved back. I would miss him.

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2 months later

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"Yo!" Nick responded on his phone. "Hey, it's Chelsea," I said, a smile on my face. "Chelsea! I haven't talked to you in what, 2 months?" he asked, sounding strangely sad. "Yeah, it's been 2 months. What's wrong? You sound depressed," I asked, curious. "My girlfriend just broke up with me," he replied. "You had a girlfriend?" I asked, devastated, but happy they were broken up. "Well, yeah. The day we left we had a concert. There was a great girl there who had backstage passes. And we ended up going out," he responded, as if it were nothing. "Oh, well, ok. I have to go. Sorry, and I'm sorry about the break-up," I lied. "Bye," he said. I hung up. I hadn't forgotten the promise he had made to me 10 years earlier when we were both 5.

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10 years before

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"Chelsea, I promise you'll be my first girlfriend ever," Nick said, holding My hand. "Ok. When?" I asked, smiling. "When we're ready," Nick said, seriously. I nodded.

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We had never gone out. And I had never had another boyfriend. But he had had another girlfriend.

Nicholas Jerry Jonas was officially dead to me.

-Libby

this probably doesn't sound very original.... but there are quite a few twists and turns in the storyline... so stay tunes :)

 


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