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New Post 8/19/2008 8:04 PM
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Ooh-ap...ooh-ap [A Joe Fanfic] [Chapter 10 is up :D] 
Modified By Hippo  on 9/1/2008 5:03:27 PM)

O o h - a p . . .

        O o h - a p . . .

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[ Note before reading: This is my second fanfiction, and my writing skills aren't really that sharp, so bare with me! A word of warning, this is Joe's POV of a relationship going on with Nick. I was hoping that this would be more of a survival story than a love story, so just be aware of that.  Sorry the first chapter is so short.  It was longer, but I erased a big part of it on accident D: ]

 "Great show, great show," the stage producer smiled, greeting us as we were escorted off stage.  I gave the same response I usually did, a groan which signaled I wanted to leave. Now.  The crowd was still screaming their guts out, enthraled by a rumor that we were doing a second encore that quickly spread around the aisles.  I had grown impatient with this, like all things. It felt now, more than ever, that this wasn't living the dream anymore.  It was more, "let's get this over with and leave."  The mood of this whole tour thing change, at least for me.  The frustration didn't show as much I felt it, but of all people, it was Kevin who noticed.  He noticed everything.  

"You seem happier than normal, Nick." "You wore those pants yesterday, didn't you Dad?" "Frankie, you didn't have a birthday cake last year." he'd point out.  It was something that we needed though, to hold together.  Whenever a note was off-pitch, or the feel of the song wasn't what he was looking for, he'd say so.  Whenever he felt that those shoes didn't go with that top, or the guitar sounded flat, he'd bring it up with whoever was in the room.   That was his thing.

"What's the rush?" he elbowed me, using his sleeve to wipe his forehead.  I didn't reply.  He shot me the look, the kind where he'd raise his eyebrows that would normally pull the truth out of you.

"I'm fine. I'm just tired." I grumbled, but he shrugged and turned around, directing his attention to one of the security guards standing off to the side.  He knew there was more to what I said.  He knew everything, and I knew he wasn't letting me off the hook.  Heck, I don't think he had me on it yet. 


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New Post 8/19/2008 8:08 PM
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Re: Ooh-ap...ooh-ap [A Joe FF] 

this sounds really good! pms!


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New Post 8/19/2008 8:08 PM
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Re: Ooh-ap...ooh-ap [A Joe FF] 

this is awesome so far!

post more soon :D


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New Post 8/19/2008 8:55 PM
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Re: Ooh-ap...ooh-ap [A Joe FF] 

Ugh, this is so great =D

Post more soon!

xoxo nicole <33


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Thanks Ari!
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New Post 8/19/2008 8:59 PM
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Re: Ooh-ap...ooh-ap [A Joe FF] 

This is great!

Can't wait to read more!


August 8th, 2008; Bryant Park
August 9th, 2008; Madison Square Garden<3

Thanx zero ^_^
Proud CTZ Dangergirl ;)
Has & always will support the Jonas Brothers because she's a JB fan.
 
New Post 8/19/2008 9:01 PM
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Re: Ooh-ap...ooh-ap [A Joe FF] 

This is good!

 

Post more please!

 

~ Britt


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New Post 8/19/2008 9:56 PM
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Modified By Hippo  on 8/19/2008 7:57:50 PM)

C h a p t e r . . .

            T w o . . .

[ Thanks for the comments guys :D It makes me feel special <3 I lost ideas in the middle portion, so sorry for the lack of the thought then. ]

 "And again, my name's Joe Jonas signing off!"

Grabbing on Nick and Kevin's wrist, we bowed, and I seemed to overdo it seeing as I yanked Kevin and Nick down so that they fell.  Lights dimming.  Floor lowering.  Girls roaring.  It was over, thank God.

"Terrific ending," Mom smiled sarcastically as we arrived at the backstage room.  As usual, she hugged and congratulated us on another successful show, at least except for the descending.  I wasn't in the mood to make a joke about it now.  I wasn't in the mood for the past few weeks, actually.  My change in temper was only noticeable to Kevin which surprised me seeing as though I hadn't had a laugh in awhile now except on stage when I was forced to.   

"Dude," Nick smiled, half-laughing.  "You almost dislocated my shoulder."

"Yeah, sorry," I looked away.  I felt bad for causing something that would probably be a good laugh on Youtube for the next week or so.  If you screwed up on a concert, you screwed up on camera too.  It was the most important thing to remember when doing a show.  There were no do-overs.  We understood this pretty well, except for today. 

"Don't worry," Nick said seeming to read my mind. "It was probably too dark then to catch it on camera."

He always said that, and he was always wrong.  The crowd always had a way to catch the smallest things, even things we hadn't noticed until we saw the actual clip.

"Great, as always, dahlins'" a thin old woman with a strong Southern accent who I didn't notice was in the room neared towards us.  "Good to have you today, fellas."

Assuming she was someone important like the stage manager, I tried to put on a smile.  It was more of my mouth hanging open showing my teeth like you'd do at the dentist though.  I wasn't good with faking.

"Boy, oh boy!" she cursed, glancing towards the clock. "Gotta get ready for that partay! Ya'll are commin', right?"

What party?

Kevin agreed quickly, saying he couldn't wait.  The lady blew kisses and stumbled down the hall in her higher-than-usual high heels.

It didn't take me that long to get all over my brothers' cases.

"Party? How come I didn't here anything about a party?!" I raised my voice, nearly yelling when the old woman had very well left.

"We thought you'd back out, so we thought we'd trick you into thinking it'd be a photoshoot." Nick uttered innocently, trying to turn look the other direction.  

"Well, it sucks that it didn't work out. I'm not go--"

 I could hear Mom in the hallway, floating happily around the studio like she usually did when she was in a better-than-normal mood.  We knew better than to disturb this, so I paused my rant as she dipped her head through the door.

"So, boys, I heard you're going to the party tonight?" she asked happily.  "Sounds exciting!"

"Yep," Kevin eyed me.  "Aren't we, Joe?"

I shot him a glare and slowly agreed, "Uh... we are." I said hesitantly before Mom nodded swiftly and continued down the hall.  When she was around, I thought I lost my anger, and that I was the old Joe again, even just for awhile.  The old, carefree, happy Joe.  Honestly, I don't know where that part of me was anymore.  I didn't know where anything was anymore.

I turned back towards where Kevin was standing, but he was already near the exit.  He was a quick mover, like he had teleporting powers or something.

"Oh yeah," Kevin said before quickly disapearing out the door to avoid the wild chase that followed soon after.  "You have to bring a date."    


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New Post 8/19/2008 10:02 PM
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bump!! ^_^


August 8th, 2008; Bryant Park
August 9th, 2008; Madison Square Garden<3

Thanx zero ^_^
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Has & always will support the Jonas Brothers because she's a JB fan.
 
New Post 8/19/2008 11:25 PM
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Re: Ooh-ap...ooh-ap [A Joe FF] 
Modified By Hippo  on 8/19/2008 9:27:15 PM)

Bump :D

I just bought this hot new Camp Rock hoodie <333 Whoa. I think I'm gonna sleep with it tonight.

And I made a crappy banner thingermajig for the fanfic.  Joe has reaaally hot hair in it :D It's so hot that my eyeballs are on fire right now just looking at it.


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New Post 8/19/2008 11:49 PM
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Re: Ooh-ap...ooh-ap [A Joe FF] 

Ooh, he has to bring a date? Awesome.

Can't wait for the new chapter!

xoxo nicole <33

And I love your new siggy =]


Thanks Ashlee!
Thanks Ari!
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