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New Post 8/24/2008 7:15 PM
User is offline geminisrock
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That Dont Impress Me Much... 

i posted CH.3 already but my story isnt showing up so im going to have to post it again. i'll repost the recap too so in case you havent read my story yet you can kind of catch up (im not really good with recaps). so enjoy :)

RECAP CHPS.1-2

Sade' (main character) is packing for college when she gets a phone call from her best friend Adrianna (Adri for short) asking her if she wanted to go to a concert and of course Sade' says yes. The next day starts off with Sade''s new purse ruined thanks to her younger sister Nina and lack of sleep since Sade' was up all night trying to find out who the band was(we know who it is ;)) and when Adri and Sade' finally almost get to meet the band, Sade' is fed up and decides to catch the bus home. [END OF RECAP]

3.

i hear a voice from a distance so i slow down my walking pace so they have somewhat of a chance to catch up to me.

"excuse me miss," the voice says. i stop walking and turn around coming face to face with a guy with dark-wavy hair, hazel/brown eyes, and a smile that is making me weak in the knees. "is something wrong? i saw you step out of the line and-"

"yes there is something wrong. i woke up this afternoon when i stayed up all night trying to find out who this band is, my fifty-dollar purse is ruined thanks to my younger sister, my head is killing me, my ears feel like they're bleeding, and my feet are killing me. so if you dont mind i have bus 352 to catch," i tell him as i continue walking.

"okay...so much for an introduction." why did he have to say that? now i feel bad that i just exploded so i stop walking towards the exit and walk back over to him to apologize.

"im so sorry for exploding like that. i just want to go home. my name is Sade' by the way."

"nice to meet you Sade'." we shake hands. "my name is-"

"LOCKDOWN!!!," a voice calls from a distance causing me and the guy to look around.

"wait here." the guy disappears and comes back with some tickets. "for you." he hands them to me. FRONT ROW?!

"wow um-thanks," i tell him as i look at the tickets in awe.

"but you have to promise me that you will stay." he looks me in the eyes causing me to stop breathing.

"i dont know-"

"promise me?" he pleads. how can i say no to that?

"ok. i promise. now all i have to do is find my best friend Adri." i look around for her.

"you mean the girl that ran off to the bathroom?" he points to the direction of the bathroom.

"that might be her. thanks again." i run off to the bathroom.

as soon as i walk into the bathroom Adri hugs me and her tears are leaving prints on my shirt.

"whats wrong with you?," i ask her.

"i asked him to marry me and he said maybe. how can i work with a maybe? i cant get rings for a maybe or a church not even-"

"Adri calm down. i ran into this guy and he gave me tickets for front row seats and im not going to take you if you keep crying over how whoever he is wont/will marry you."

Adri quickly wipes her eyes with the back of her hand and splashes cold water on her face. "how do i look?"

"like a mess. did you know that you had mascara on?" i point to her smeared eyes.

"i forgot!" she looks in the mirror. "do you have any?"

"no. i dont like to wear makeup so just wash that mess off your face and come on before we miss the opening." i walk out of the bathroom.

"okay im coming."

i will have to make my posts shorter since i posted a lot the last time i typed up CH.3 and it didnt work. so ill just continue from each chapter i leave off from and still have recaps over the ones that i complete.


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