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New Post 8/25/2008 12:39 PM
User is offline BurninUp4NickJ
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My Shing Light...Chapter 13 and 14...Needs Readers 
Modified By BurninUp4NickJ  on 10/5/2008 10:06:41 PM)

Okay peoples, I promised a chapter early this week, and now I'm giving it to you! This is my first fanfiction and some of it was written a while ago, so don't judge to harshly, but your feedback is welcome, and much appreciated! So here's the first chapter, I hope you like...

My Shining Light

 

Chapter 1:

 

She couldn’t believe she was here. Sarah was sitting (actually she was standing and screaming) in front row seats to her favorite band, the JONAS BROTHERS!!! Sarah was 15 and had longish curly dark brown hair and here eyes were sea-blue colored. She had been told she looked like Demi Lovato, with maybe a twist of Selena Gomez. She was with her best friend Chelsea and her mom, for adult supervision. Sarah and Chelsea had been Jonas Brother’s fans for as long as they could remember and that was really what had gotten them to be such close friends. Chelsea was 18, had clear blue eyes and medium length blond hair.

 

          The boys had just finished playing Year 3000. and Sarah, like most other fans, knew all the words. She had been singing the whole concert. The girl next to her turned and said…

 

“Hi! I’m Charlotte, but my friends call me Charlie.” She had long blond hair with brown eyes. She looked around 19, maybe a little older. But she looked friendly and easy to get along with.

 

“Hi, I’m Sarah.” she replied back. “Maybe I’ll make a new friend.” she thought

 

“You have an amazing voice.” Charlie told Sarah, making her briefly blush, but nobody noticed because of the flashing lights.

 

“Thanks, I really love to sing, but don’t usually do it in public too much. Tonight is an exception though because I love the boys so much!” she had to shout because of all the screaming.

 

“Well I think you should definitely go for it. You seriously have a lot of talent.” Charlie shouted back.


“Thanks, that’s really nice of you to say. So who is your favorite?” Sarah asked


“Kevin! I love him!!!” Charlie said

 

“That’s cool. I really, totally, absolutely love Nick!!! Oh and this is my best friend Chelsea!” Sarah said turning to Chelsea, and facing her towards Charlie. “Charlie this is Chelsea, Chelsea likes Joe!” Sarah said introducing them.

 

“So why are you here alone?” Chelsea asked

 

“Well, since I’m 19, I can drive, and none of my friends like the Jonas Brothers, so here I am, all by myself.” Charlie explained

 

“Well you can hang out with us.” Sarah suggested

 

“I’d like that.” Charlie replied

 

          The boys had been taking a small break, getting some water, and wiping off with some towels. But they were ready to start playing again.

 

“Ok guys, we just wanted to say thank you for coming out to see us tonight!!!” Kevin said

 

“Yeah and the next song we want to play for you is Still in Love with You!” Joe yelled into the microphone.

 

          They started to play and the screaming just got louder. But Joe suddenly had idea to make the concert more interesting and exciting for one of the fans. He saw a girl, in the front row who was singing to the song, and he knew she would be perfect!!!

 

So comments make me very happy!!!
Sarah

 


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New Post 8/25/2008 1:38 PM
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YEA FINALLY LOL!!!!!

I love it please please PMS!!!!


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New Post 8/25/2008 7:01 PM
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YAYY!!!

I found the story!!

and i LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!

:D

its so exciting to be in a story!!

anywayss

pms!!

& see u at batman


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New Post 8/26/2008 11:10 AM
User is offline BurninUp4NickJ
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Re: My Shing Light 
Modified By BurninUp4NickJ  on 8/26/2008 9:25:47 AM)

hey peeps!!! I'm at my moms office today....so idk if i'll be able to post, i'm gonna try in a minute, but i just got back from the hospital....and i have to go see a doctor later today for my diabete-like problems...so yeah, i hope everything goes well and they find out whats wrong with me!!! i'll try posting soon!!!

Sarah


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New Post 8/26/2008 11:23 AM
User is offline BurninUp4NickJ
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Re: My Shing Light 
Modified By BurninUp4NickJ  on 8/26/2008 9:26:58 AM)

Here's chapter 2...i got it to work...i think, we'll see in a sec.

Chapter 2:

 

When the line “It might’ve hurt worse to hear you say, I’m leaving goodbye.” came around Joe put the microphone right up to Sarah. And as surprised as she was, she kept singing. After she finished Joe gave her a thumbs up and winked. Then he finished the song himself. Chelsea and Charlie both yelled ‘Oh my Jonas” at Sarah and gave her a high five.

 

Kevin was thinking… “Wow, why didn’t he tell us he was going to do that?

 

Nick was thinking… “Wow! Who is that girl? Her voice is amazing and she’s really pretty!!!”

 

Joe on the other hand was thinking… “Wow, sometimes it even amazes me on how smart I can be.” and he laughed at himself silently

 

          The boys got in a circle and quickly discussed what had just happened. Then they went and told the rest of the band. Next they had someone bring out an extra microphone and a microphone stand. “What are they doing?” Sarah was wondering, but she didn’t have to wait long for an answer…

 

“Hey guys, we hope you enjoyed that last song.” Kevin started

 

“Again we really just wanted to say thank you!” Nick said

 

“Yeah, but now we have a special surprise for one very special fan.” added Joe. “At the end of that last song we had a very talented fan in the front row sing a line from ‘Still in Love with You’.”

 

“And now, if she wants to, we’re inviting her to come up and sing one or two songs with us!” Nick finished, while Joe went up to Sarah, grabbing her hand and helping her on to the stage.

 

“What’s your name?” Joe asked her, holding out the extra microphone.

 

“Sarah.” she replied shyly

 

“Well it’s very nice to meet you!” Joe said hugging her. “Hey guys give it up for our new friend Sarah!” Joe yelled to the fans, while Sarah said hi and gave hugs to Nick and Kevin.

 

“I cannot believe this is happening.” she thought to herself.

 

“Do you know ‘Pushin Me Away’?” Kevin asked.

 

“Absolutely, it’s one of my favorites.” she said

 

“Cool, let’s play it! One! Two! Three!!!” Nick yelled

 

          And it started, just like that, the beginning of Sarah’s new life! She sang the whole song, every word. She didn’t even know that she could sing like that, she got so caught up in the moment, looking at everything around her. The people, the lights, she had never felt a rush like that before! But most of all she couldn’t keep her eyes off the boys, especially Nick. And she didn’t realize it, but he was as mesmerized by her, as she was by him.

 

When it finished, everyone went crazy. “Wow…you…wow.” Nick stammered

 

“Yeah, what Nick said.” Joe said laughing

 

“How bout one more song? ‘Can’t Have You’?” Kevin suggested

 

“Yeah, sure, I love that song!” she said

 

“Are there any songs that you don’t like? Joe asked still laughing

 

“Nope, I love them all.” Sarah said joining in on Joe’s laughter

 

“Ok, here we go again!” Kevin said getting pumped up for the next song

 

And again, Sarah sounded amazing. She couldn’t stop looking at the boys. They were so talented and cute! At that moment she knew that music was everything she wanted to do, it was her life. And nothing could take it away from her.

 

“So guys, what do you think? Does she have what it takes?” Kevin asked the crowd, and they screamed their approval

 

“Ok we let her sing with us, but now we want to sing a song to her. Sarah, this one is for you!” Nick said as some one from backstage brought out a stool for her to sit on and they started to play ‘Hello Beautiful’, her favorite song!!!!

 

 

Hope you liked it.

 


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New Post 8/26/2008 11:54 AM
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fantastic :]

u should post more now :]


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New Post 8/26/2008 11:59 AM
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Re: My Shing Light 

lol, i'll wai for a few more comments....and could u maybe post it on ur fanfiction to come read mine please?


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New Post 8/26/2008 2:39 PM
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Re: My Shing Light 

Aww I really like thisss

pmss =))


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August 9th, 2008; Madison Square Garden<3

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Has & always will support the Jonas Brothers because she's a JB fan.
 
New Post 8/26/2008 2:54 PM
User is offline BurninUp4NickJ
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Re: My Shing Light 

thanks, i don't know if i'll post right now...i have to go to the doctors soon...and hopefully not the hospital again...i've already been there once today.

maybe in a bit...maybe...


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New Post 8/26/2008 3:18 PM
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Re: My Shing Light 

no more readers....that makes me sad...


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