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New Post 5/20/2007 2:48 PM
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The Great Escape 

Okay... so I promised another one. Sorry if the beggining is weird. It does get better  Responding would be appreciated. Hope you like it.

Chapter 1- The Contest

I am so incredibly, annoyingly, ordinary. You can't find anything special about me even if you tried. I have long, straight brown hair, with natural blonde highlights. freckles that annoy me so... and green eye's. But nothing special. I sat at my computer typing away at a contest form for the Jonas Brothers! My hands were already getting tired from writing. I filled out like 50 forms so far. Some people would call it obsessive but I call it determination. You see I'm not that obsessed with them it's just that I live in a poor family and we can't afford things like concert tickets. So, this is my only chance to meet them in person. That would be so awesome if I won but I knew that thousands of other girls were probably doing the same thing right now. I finally decided that I had done enough and turned off my monitor. I went up to my dresser, pulled out clean pj's, turned out the light, got into bed and pulled the covers over my head.

4 weeks later...

"And the winner is..." I was waiting impatiently and nervously. I bit my lip in anticipation. "Julia Reynolds!" they yelled. I stared at the television screen in disbelief. No way... this isn't real. But then reality came rushing back to me and I felt that I couldn't contain myself. I started screaming at the top of my lungs. and jumped around in joy. My parents and my big brother ran into my room to see what was wrong. They looked at me like I was crazy. "What? can't a girl scream?" I asked. "Dork..." my brother said. They all shuffeled out of my room annoyed. But right now I could care less because I get to meet the Jonas Brothers! This is perfect. : )

*****

I stepped off the plane and felt the cold wind whip my face. I clutched my coat tightly to my body and shivered. I'm not really used to this weather because... well, I live in Florida. Get the picture? a man in a brown coat came up to me. "You Julia?" he asked. "Yes" I answered. "Come with me" he said. I followed him into a limo. I hope he isn't some serial killer. But he did know my name so... I spread out and put my legs on another seat and relaxed. Yeah, this is the life. I closed my eyes and thought about a relaxing place with waterfalls and rainbows. "We're here" he said while opening the door. Okay, relaxation time over. I climbed out of the car and looked around. Blinding lights, honking horns, huge billboards. Wow, cool! I could get used to this. The man I was following lead me to a hotel and we went into a large elevator. The elevator stopped at the second floor and we got out. I was sweating terribly and was so nervous. We stopped at a door and the man knocked.

OMG! Kevin Jonas opened the door! "Hey" he said smiling. "Come on in" he said. I blushed and walked into the room.

"Good luck" the man in the brown coat nodded. I just nodded. I walked further into the hotel room and saw awesome lounge chairs, plasma tv, modern paintings, and a mini cabana. "Sweet..." I said. "I know" Joe said from a corner of the room. He got up and came over to me and Kevin. "Wats up? I'm Joe" he said. "I'm Julia" I said. Nick came out of a door from the right. He saw me and came right over. "Hey, I'm Nick" he said. "Julia" I said. "That's an awesome name" he said. "Thanks" I said while blushing. "So, your the contest winner" Kevin said. "Yup" I said. "Are you ready to go on tour tomorrow?" Joe asked. "Absolutely" I said. We all laughed. We all sat down on the sofa. "You play video games?" Nick asked. "Maybe..." I said. We put in a random game and realized it was Guitar Hero. Yes! I rock at that game! me and Nick picked up our guitars and got in playing stance. "Are you ready?" he asked. I smirked. "The question is, are you ready?" I asked. He smirked back at me. Kev and Joe were watching intentley, interested in who was going to win. We were head to head for a while but in the end I won. "Oh, yeah!" I yelled. "Who's the master?" I said. He laughed. "You are" he said. I smiled back at him. "That's right" I said. He also smiled back.

I blushed. After playing a few other games we decided to watch a movie. It was a scary one, The Grudge. We dimmed the lights and sat around in a circle. Oh god... I hate this part. Someone suddenly popped out of nowhere on the screen and I grabbed Nick's arm. When I realized what I was doing I let go and blushed a deep red. "I'm sorry" I said. "It's okay" he said while laughing a little. The movie was over soon and it was time to go to bed. There was only two beds but they were huge, king size beds. Kev and Joe already jumped onto one bed. "You can take the bed, I can take the sofa" he said. "No, that's not necessary, I'll take the sofa" I said. "But your the guest" he said. Obviously we aren't going to settle this. I would sleep on the floor.... if I never saw that show on bed bugs. I looked over at Joe and Kevin but they were already asleep. "Why don't we just sleep in one bed, I mean it is a big bed and... it's not really that big of a deal" I said. He looked skeptical. "Are you okay with it?" he asked. "Yeah" I said. "Okay" he said. We both got into our pj's and climbed into bed. "Goodnight Valerie" he said. I rolled over and smiled. "Goodnight Nick" I said with a huge grin on my face.


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New Post 5/20/2007 2:57 PM
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hey, i really like it but i'm a little confuzzled. i thought the main's girl name was Julia not valerie. but other than that i love it. post more please!
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New Post 5/20/2007 2:58 PM
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Oh yeah, i'm sorry that was a mistake. Sorry.
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New Post 5/20/2007 3:13 PM
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OMG I LOVE BOYS LIKE GIRLS TOO!!!  they are one of my favorete bands!! I sall them play with hellogoodbye and the lead singer is sooooooooooo cute!! not as cute as nick of coure but cute! I am crazy about head over heels!! it is sooooooo good!! AND i LOVE THE STORY
 
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ahh i loove it! moree!
 
New Post 5/20/2007 5:14 PM
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I love Boys Like Girls! lol. Here is next chapter. Enjoy

Chapter 2- Truth or Dare?

I woke up with a slight yawn and felt a warm body next to me. Nick. I sat up in bed and looked around. Everyone else was asleep. I got out of bed and tiptoed out into the living room. My stomach was grumbling. With all the excitment last night I forgot to have dinner. I creeped into the cabana and looked into the fridge. Wow... they've got everything here. I decided to make pancakes since they are my specialty. I put the finishing touches and got out a couple plates. Joe walked through the door way sleepily. When he saw the pancakes his eyes went wide. "Pancakes!" he yelled while running towards the plate of pancakes. I laughed. Joe started to stuff his face with food when Nick walked in rubbing his eyes. "Joe, what are you doing?" he asked. "Eating, what does it look like I'm doing?" Joe said. Nick laughed and rolled his eyes. Later Kevin joined us and we were all eating pancakes. "This is so good" Nick said. Joe just nodded his head with a full mouth. "Thanks, it's my grandma's recipe" I said. Soon we were finished and had to hit the road. I sat down on a plush lounge chair and closed my eyes. I didn't really get much sleep last night. We were heading through two more states. I hope I don't get bored.

*****

 

Somebody was shaking me. "Julia, wake up" Nick said. My eyes fluttered open. "What happened?" I asked while rubbing my eyes. "You fell asleep" he said. I sat up and crossed my legs indian style. "We stopped for food but I didn't want to wake you so... we got you something" he said while holding a bag up. I took the bag and looked inside. Fries and a sprite. "I hope it's okay, I kind of guessed what you would eat" Nick said uncertain. "It's my fave, thank you" I said while smiling. Nick looked relieved. "I also got a burger for you but Joe ate it, sorry" he said. I chuckled. "It's okay" I said. I popped a fry in my mouth. "So where are we?" I asked. "We're in Deleware" he said. I laughed. "Figures" I said. ( the whole Deleware thing makes more sense when you've seen Wayne's World. lol.) We both laughed this time. "We're getting close" he said. I nodded. We got bored quickly so we decided to play M*A*S*H*. I was married to Orlando Bloom! awesome... and Nick was married to Keri Lynn Pratt. We were laughing about it for like ever. "If you could actually marry someone who would it be?" I asked. He thought for a moment. "I don't know... I guess whatever happens, happens you know?" he said.
"Yeah, I feel the same way" I said. We sat in silence for a while.

"I'm bored again" I said. "It's been like 2 minutes" Nick said in disbelief. "Have you noticed how short my attention span is?" I asked. He laughed. "I see your point" he said. I pondered for a minute, wondering on what to do next. "How about truth or dare?" I asked. "Isn't that a little juvenile?" he asked. "Truth or dare is timeless" I said. He still didn't look to happy. "Please..." I said giving him the puppy dog pout. "Okay" he said giving in. "Yay!" I said. "Me first" I said. "Truth or dare?" I asked. "Truth" he said. "Who is your first girlfriend?" I asked. He looked embar*CENSORED*ed. "I've never had a girlfriend before" he said blushing. "Really? I haven't had a boyfriend either" I said. We both laughed. "Truth or dare?" Nick asked. "Truth" I said. He thought for a moment. "What's your deepest, darkest secret?" he asked with a smile. I thought about this for a while. Should I tell him? maybe I should... "I sing" I blurted. I blushed the deepest red ever! "Really?"

he asked intrigued. "Yes" I answered. "I'm just a little shy" I said. He nodded again. "What about you?" I asked. "What?" he asked. "Your deepest, darkest secret?" I asked. He thought for a moment. "I'm deathfully afraid of clowns" Nick said. I tried to not laugh. "Wow..." I said. Then we both broke out laughing hystericaly. "One more thing" Nick said. "Yes?" I asked. "Why don't you have a boyfriend?" he asked. "I guess I'm just waiting for someone special to come along..." I said. He nodded his head. We continued a while but soon got bored again. And then we finally made it! "Yeah!" I shouted while running out of the bus. The cold air whipping my face. "Freedom!" I yelled. Joe, Nick and Kevin laughed.


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i loove it!! morreeee!!
 
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Please Post More!!!
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New Post 5/20/2007 8:52 PM
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Okay.

Chapter 3- Hello Beautiful?

The concert was totally awesome and I was getting completely excited. But then... he played the song. "Please be mine."

Nick started out the song.

I try to come closer with you
But they all say we won't make it through

But I'll be there forever
You will see that it's better
Our hopes and our dreams will come true
I will not disappoint you
I'll be right there for you 'til the end
The end of time
Please be mine

I'm in and out of love with you
Trying to find if it's really true
oh no no no no
How can I prove my love
If they all think I'm not good enough

But I'll be there forever
You will see that it's better
Our hopes and our dreams will come true
I will not disappoint you
I will be right there for you 'til the end
The end of time
Please be mine

Can't stop the rain from falling
Can't stop my heart from calling you
It's calling you
Can't stop the rain from falling
Can't stop my heart from calling you
It's calling you
Can't stop the rain from falling
Can't stop my heart from calling you
It's calling you

But I'll be there forever
You will see that it's better
Our hopes and our dreams will come true
I will not disappoint you
I will be right there for you 'til the end
The end of time
Please be mine

Then after that song I felt a new feeling in my chest and butterflies in my stomach. That's strange. I ignored those feelings and congratulated Nick on his performance. "You guys were great" I said. "Thanks" Nick said. I gave him a big hug and finally it sunk in. Oh no... electric shocks went up my spine and my legs felt like rubber. I have feelings for... Nick! I let go and smiled. Stop smiling doofus! I quickly frowned. Nick gave me a strange look. Quick distract them! "So what's your next song?" I asked. Nick gave me a funny smile. My heart beated faster. "What?" I asked. "Hello Beautiful... and guess who is joining me?" he asked. "Who...?" I asked with a confused expression. "You" he said smiling. "What!?" I yelled. But before he could repsond he pulled me ontstage. I looked out at all of the people and gulped. I'm not very good in front of audiences... Then the beginning music started and I thought I was going to throw up but then... he looked at me and... I don't know... My stomach stopped churning, my heart stopped beating as much, I felt confident and... strangely... loved? Nick started to sing. My heart felt like it was melting and my head was throbbing terribly. But I strung along words from my throat. He smiled back at me a sweet smile. I felt like I could fly! further into the song I relaxed

and I sounded pretty good meshed with his voice. Then... the song ended and I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. It's over... that was exhilirating! we walked off stage and Nick embraced me in a tight hug. Shivers went up and down my spine. How does he do this to me? I let go and smiled back at him. But then I frowned and smacked his arm. "Ow!" he yelped grabbing his arm. "What was that for?" he asked confused. "You dragged me on without warning!" I yelled. Then my expression softened and I kissed him on the cheek. He blushed. "That was for helping me overcome my fear" I said blushing also. "You sounded wonderful" Nick said. I blushed a deeper red. "Thanks... you don't sound so bad yourself" I said. "We should sing again another time" he said. "Yeah, that would be cool" I said smiling.

Joe's POV

I was putting my guitar in my case when I saw... her. Then my world changed. My heart skipped a beat and my knee's weakened. She had straight, light, brown hair, doe brown eye's and light skin. She smiled and waved at me. I smiled back... but she got carried off by the crowd. My smile dropped. "What's wrong?" Kevin asked. "I lost a beautiful girl..." Joe said trailing off. "So did I, she walked off before I got her last name!" Kevin said. "Seana...." Kevin said looking out into the sunrise. "Hey! I didn't even get her first name!" Joe yelled. Kevin laughed. Joe gave him a dirty look.

Back to Julia's POV

We all packed in the bus. I was soooo tired from this long day. I collapsed on the sofa. "You can't sleep there" Nick said. I just mumbled. I felt arms grab my waist and wrap around the back of my knees. He pulled my arms around his neck for more support.

I was blushing and grinning ear to ear behind his back. He layed me down on the bed gently and pulled the covers over my arms. "Sweet dreams" Nick said. He was about to walk out... but turned around and kissed my forehead softly. I smiled a cheshire grin once he left but soon drifted off to sleep.


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