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New Post 5/20/2007 10:19 PM
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tomooooorow, tomoroooow I love ya. More tomorrow.
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New Post 5/20/2007 11:37 PM
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I really like ti!!
 
New Post 5/21/2007 3:19 AM
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aww awsome, cant wait till you post more

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New Post 5/21/2007 5:02 PM
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww, nick carried her to bed. that's soooooooo sweet! this is awesome.
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New Post 5/21/2007 6:00 PM
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Thanx . Here's the new chapter.

Chapter 4- Sick!

I woke up and shuffeled out into the little kitchen area. "Morning, sleepy head" Nick said smiling. I smiled back. "Morning" I replied. "Did you know you talk in your sleep?" Joe asked. "I do not..." I said while blushing. "Yeah, I heard it too... you have quite a sailors mouth" Kev said. I blushed a scarlet red. Nick giggled trying to contain his laughter. I started to laugh too forgetting my ember*CENSORED*ment and everyone else joined in. We were off to yet ANOTHER concert. I sat down in a swivley chair and spun around. "You know, I'm getting used to having you around" Joe said. "Me too" Nick said. "Me three!" Kev yelled from the back of the bus. We all laughed. "Thanks guys, I'm getting used to you too" I said. After we had many popcorn fights and really corny "Joe Jokes", we finally made it. The concert was just as good as the first two except I wasen't in this one. I wasn't feeling too well ever since we stopped for food. Actually... I think I'm going to hurl... gross! I searched every where. I ran backstage and found a bathroom. Thank God. I threw up in the toilet. My stomach was on fire! I tried to grip for my hair to pull it back but couldn't find my hairtie with the other hand. Then I felt soft hands grasp my hair and pull it back into a ponytail. I turned around. Nick? "Nick, what are you doing here?" I asked. "Concerts over, I saw you bending over the toilet and thought you could use some help" he said smiling comfortingly. "You really don't have to... It's pretty gross actually..." I said. "I don't care, that's what friends are for right?" he said.

"Thank you" I said while flushing the toilet. "Your so sweet" I said. "It's nothing" he said while smiling a big smile. My heart leapt at how kind and considerate he was. But then reality hit me. He's NICK JONAS. Tons of girls are falling for him and I am just one of them. There is no way I can win this. I turned back towards the toilet. "Be right back, I'll get something for your stomachache" he said. While he was gone a single tear slid down my cheek and plopped into the water of the toilet bowl. I sighed. I can never win can I?

Kevin's POV

I spotted Seana in the crowd. My heart did leaps in my chest. I run in her direction and catch her before she walked out the door. "Hi, remember me?" he asked out of breath. Seana laughed. "Of course, how could I not" she said. I smiled. She remembered me! oh wait.... cause i'm Kevin Jonas... oh.... I knew that. I blushed. "So... I was thinking. Me and my bro's and Julia are going to dinner tomorrow and well.... I was wondering.." I said shyly. "I would love too" Seana said with a bright smile interupting me. I smiled back. "Okay then i'll call you and tell you the details" I said. She smiled and nodded. I walked off towards the stage lovestruck. Joe had a huge smile on his face also. "Why are you so happy?" I asked. "I know her name! it's Rachel! I love that name... Rachel" he said looking off into the distance. I waved a hand in front of his eye-sight. "Helloooo anyone home?" I asked. "I don't think there was anyone home in the first place" Joe said. I laughed. "I invited her to dinner tomorrow" Joe said. "I invited Seana to dinner too" I said with a smile. and we both looked off into empty space for a while like idiots because we fell for two girls who only met us twice. Wow...

****

I was lying down in a hotel with a cold, wet bag over my forehead and a thermomoter in my mouth. Kev pulled it out of my mouth. "So, what's the news doc?" I asked. "Yep, your definetly sick" he said. "Great..." I mumbled. "Well, at least there's a break in out tour and there is not alot of places left to go to so we won't do a lot of traveling" Joe said. "Except getting you home of course" Nick added. "But what about you guys?" I asked. "Won't you guys be bored taking care of me?" I asked. "No" they all said at the same time. "Okay" I said. "If you guys don't mind then I guess it wont be that bad" I said. "Cool" they both said at the same time again. I laughed.

****

My cold sweat was getting horrible. I thought a few seconds a go I was searing hot!? I grabbed at the blankets and pulled them around my body. I was shivering from the cold. brhhhhh... Nick walked in with blankets. "I'm so sorry Julia" he said sadly. He wrapped the blankets around my body but it still wasen't enough. Nick gave me a nervous look. "What?" I asked shivering. "This might be a little akward but... it will help..." Nick said. He climbed in the bed and layed down next to me. Then he wrapped his arms around me in a warming embrace. I shivered but not from being cold. My temperature began to rise quickly probably because my cheeks were on fire because the guy I was crazy about is lying next to me with his arms around me. I sighed. I turned around and smiled. "Thank you" I said. "It's no problem... I was just kinda worried you would freak out cause I was..." he said trailing off. "It's okay, I get it" I said. He looked a little ember*CENSORED*ed but not as nervous. "You know... your a really good friend" I said. He smiled at me a smile that made me go weak. His curly hair was in disarray and his chocolate brown eyes were sparkling in the dim light. I began to get very tired and drifted off to sleep.


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I love ti!! write more now!! lol
 
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i love it!!

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New Post 5/21/2007 7:22 PM
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Chapter 5- Plays, Dinners and Snowball Fights

When I opened my eyes I felt like a huge boulder has been lifted from my chest and I felt like normal temperature. I felt MUCH better. But I looked totally messy and greasy when I looked into the mirror. I ran some fingers through my hair. Yeah, definitley greasy. I walked into the bathroom, closed the door and turned on the shower. The hot water felt nice after being cold for so long. I took a while in the shower and my skin was scalded but I felt much better. I hopped out of the shower and wrapped a towel around my body. Oh crap... I forgot my suitcase in the living room... I would have to walk in with only a towel on in front of the guys! Hopefully they aren't looking. I opened the door and closed it behind me. All of them sat there on the couch staring at me with wide eyes. I bent down to get my suitcase and blushed a scarlet red. "That's a new look for you" Joe said. I blushed even more. Nick looked as red as a tomato. Lol... he looked more embar*CENSORED*ed then I was! Kevin started laughing at Nick's face. "Dude you look like a vegetable" he said in between laughs. Then everyone started laughing but Nick started blushing even more.

Aww... he's so shy. I picked up my bag and walked back into my room then I got changed. I ran a brush through my wet, tangled hair until it was nice, dry and shiny. I walked outside and sat down next to them. "Looks like your feeling better" Nick said. "I do... I feel much better" I said. "And it's all because of you guys, thank you" I said. "No prob" they all said. "We should do something fun today!" I said excitedly. "All I've been doing the past few days is lay around and watch movies all day" I said. "Well, we were thinking of going out to dinner and then going to a play later" Kev said. "That sounds cool" I said. "You bring anything fancy?, it's formal attire" Joe said. "I think so" I said. I know so but I didn't want to tell them that I brought my whole closet. lol. "I'll be looking foward to it" I said.

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It was dinner time and I was having a hard time figuring out what to wear? my v-neck sweater with mini skirt or my short, sparkly, blue dress. I decided to wear the sweater and skirt to the play and the dress to the dinner. I put on my dress then got some earrings out of my jewelry box. I got my curling iron out of my suitcase and started curling. After I was finished I put on a little make-up and was finished. I went out into the lobby where everyone was waiting for me. I swear I thought I saw Joe's mouth and Nick's jaw drop. Kevin just smiled and whistled at me. I blushed. "Why thank you" I said. "You look amazing" Joe said smiling. Nick looked shocked, embar*CENSORED*ed and excited at the same time. "You look..." he started stumbling for words. "Beautiful" he said with a big smile. I blushed even more. "Thanks... you look handsome yourself" I said. Now it was his turn to blush. He did look rreeeeeeeeeally cute though. He was wearing a tux, his tie loosened so it dangeled right above his chest. His hair was very curly and wavy but it clung tightly to his head and his beautiful brown eyes had a special sparkle to them. He looked....... adorable! There was also two other girls there. They looked nice too. Joe and Kevin could not take their eyes off of them. lol. We got into the car and waited to be dropped off at the reasturant. The driver stopped and we all got out of the car. Nick held out his hand so he could help me get out. Aw... how sweet.

We were seated at a table outside. A waiter came soon to take our orders. When the waiter left I started a convo. "So how do you know so much about being sick?" I asked Nick. He did seem like he knew a lot about being sick. "Because I'm in hospitals a lot and I guess I learn a lot from the nurses and doctors there" he said. A hush went through the whole table. Strange... "Why?" I asked. He gave me a sad look. "Because I have diabetes" he said. I stared at him. OMG that's why.... "I'm so sorry" I said. He smiled at me. "It's okay" he said. "If you don't mind me asking... Is it hard?" I asked. He looked up from his plate. "Sometimes it is but my family and friends are always here for me so I know I can make it through in the end" he said. "Wow..." I said. There was silence for a moment. How could he do it all? he's so confident, driven and positive. How could he not let diabetes stand in his way? "Your an amazing person Nick Jonas" I said. He smiled a big smile. "So are you" he said. I smiled back at him and everyone started talking again. ( I don't even know why I added the diabetes part. lol.) I looked over at Joe. He was in a deep convo with Rachel. They looked cute together.... Kevin kept on smiling and looking over at Seana. Cuuuhhhute. : )

****

Play time! and it was one of my favorites. Beauty and the Beast! I love that play... the line was already starting. No...! we were going to be at the back! Nick grabbed my hand and pulled me towards the stand. We ran all the way there and got to be 4th in line. Woo hoo! we walked into the theatre and sat down at our seats. I felt something warm holding on to my hand. I looked over and it was Nick's hand was still holding mine! OMG I think I just had a coronary. Nick saw it too. He blushed and pulled his hand away. "Sorry..." he said ember*CENSORED*ed. I smiled. "It's okay I don't mind" I said. Then the play began and I got excited. The play ended way to soon and we were filing out of the theatre. "I'll be back in a sec" Kevin said. "I'll come too" Seana said. They both smiled and walked off holding hands. I laughed. Joe whistled and looked around. "Ok.... you can go too Joe" Nick said. "Yay!" Joe yelled. He grabbed Rachel's hand and walked off towards the moon. (lol) and I was left alone with Nick. We stood in silence for a moment until I broke it. "You wanna make snow angels?" I asked. He laughed. "Sure" he answered. I layed down in the snow and spread my legs and arms out. So did Nick. I looked over at him. "You have a piece of snow in your hair" I said while laughing. I pulled the piece out of his hair. He blushed. I laughed again. He is so cuuuute. I got up and rolled a piece of snow into a ball. "Oh no..." Nick said getting up. I threw it at him. "Your going down!" Nick yelled. I laughed. He hurled one at me but it missed. I aimed at his head and I threw. He fell down and threw his arms up. "I surrender" he said. I laughed. I went over to help him up but tripped over a hole in the snow.

And I landed on Nick! He grabbed my arms. "Are you okay?" he asked. "Yeah... sorry.." I said. He just smiled at me. His hair was wet from the snow and his curls were clinging to his neck and the side of his head. His eyes were shimmering in the moonlight. I smiled down on him. He rolled over switching positions on me and was on top of me. I bit my lip, my heart pounding through my chest. He gave me a loving look and bent his head closer to my face. Every inch he moved made my heart beat faster. I closed my eyes. His lips began to brush mine... Someone cleared their throat. I opened my eyes and Nick had an annoyed look on his face. He got off me and helped me up. "Sorry to interupt" Joe said. "The car is here" Kev said. "Sorry" Nick whispered in my ear. I smiled at him. "It's okay" I said. Rachel and Seana giggled and winked at me. I laughed.

We climbed into the car and drove back to the hotel. I leaned my head on Nick shoulder and everyone smiled at us. Nick put one arm around my shoulder, pulling me closer to his side. I smiled. Never in a million years had I ever thought that this could happen... Maybe this is all a dream and I am going to wake up soon... I hope not. The car stopped and we all got out. Rachel kissed Joe on the lips. Wow... and Seana gave Kevin a big bear hug. (I suspected they already kissed. lol.)

We went up to the room and we all collapsed on our beds. This is probably the best night in my life. Just wish I could have gotten that kiss...


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omj Beauty and the Beast is amazing! i saw it on Broadway last year it was sooo good!

anyway i loove it!moree!!

 
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I reaaaaaaaally want to see it!! and I love the story
 
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