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P.S. I'm Still Not Over You ( A Kevin FF) Updated 9/21 Chapter 40!!!!COMPLETED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
Modified By AshleyE (Turns 21 tomorrow!!!!)   on 9/21/2008 6:44:02 PM)

P.S. I’m Still Not Over You

 

Prologue

 

Excuse me, I really didn’t mean to ramble on

But there’s a lot of feelings that remain since you’ve been gone

I guess you thought that I would have put it all behind me

But it seems there’s always somethin’ right there to remind me

 

The late September sky in New Jersey was painted orange as Riley stood in her backyard, kicking the fallen leaves from beneath her feet.  She looked around to the all too familiar yard and thought back to the many memories that took place right where she was standing.  Her first kiss with her best friend, her first party, and the first time she had her heart broken. The good…the bad…and the ugly as she liked to refer to them.

            “Hey,” a smooth voice came from behind her.  She spun around to see the short, spiky haired boy who also shared in many of those fond memories.

            “Hey, you. Glad you could come.” She moved closer as he wrapped his arms around her.  She stood there in his arms feeling the warmth of his body, knowing how much she was going to miss every aspect about him.  She had known these arms since she was a baby, Kevin Jonas was only a year older than her, but from October 3, 1988 on the two had been inseparable.  They had been best friends and just before Kevin made the move from 8th grader to high school freshman, they had been each other’s boyfriend or girlfriend, but now their relationship seemed doomed to not last despite both parties’ tries.

            “I have something to tell you,” she said facing him.  His hazel eyes seemed to bore into hers, wishing the answers right from light blue eyes, “I’m moving October 1st.” At first they stood in silence neither one daring to make the first move or say the first thing.  She watched the emotions play across his face.  One second he looked like he could cry and the next like he was ready to scream.  She felt his grip loosen and her hands fall away from his.  He paced the yard in front of her, hoping to walk the words right into his mouth.

            “Why.” There he had finally said something.

            “My mom and dad can’t afford to live here anymore.  So they thought before Trey and I get into high school and become attached, they would move us now and start over with everyone else.”

            “Isn’t it a little late for attachment issues,” he said turning away from her, “They should have moved away when you were born then.”

            “Kevin…”

            “Don’t Riley.” She knew he was upset, but so was she.  She hated the idea of moving somewhere new and having to find someone to replace the void that would be Kevin Jonas.

            “I love you and I always will.  We can try and make this work you know,” she was standing in back of him with her hands on his shoulders, resting her forehead on his back, “I can always visit or you can come visit me.” He sighed heavily, letting his chest fall dramatically.

            “So I have one week to get in as much time with you before you leave.” She simply nodded, “Well then let’s make this week count.”

 

 

            Riley awoken to the incessant beeping from her alarm clock, it was already five thirty and just like every other day, the alarm clock cut her dream of Kevin short. She groaned as she flipped herself onto her back and starred at the ceiling.  It had been five years to the day that she had moved away from Kevin Jonas and five years of trying to fill the empty void that was left once they had lost contact with each other and lost each other forever. The bed shifted next to her throwing her from her thoughts of Kevin.  It was like the universe itself was against any thought she ever had of Kevin.

            “Hey Hun,” said the half sleeping figure next to her, “Do you want to shower first or should I.”  She smiled slightly down at the man who now she was calling her fiancée.

            “I’ll go. You go ahead and hit snooze.” She removed herself from the bed and started her day just like she had been doing for the past five years.

 

 

 

Ok, so that was the prologue.  I have more written, but I wanted to test the waters first.  Just so you know, Kevin as well as Nick and Joe will be popping up in the next few chapters. So Please Please Please comment and let me know what you think!

 

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New Post 8/28/2008 4:41 PM
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Re: P.S. I'm Still Not Over You ( A Kevin FF) BRAND NEW Prologue up 8/28!!!!  

Bump.


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New Post 8/28/2008 4:53 PM
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Re: P.S. I'm Still Not Over You ( A Kevin FF) BRAND NEW Prologue up 8/28!!!!  

ahh

i loved it

PMS please

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Re: P.S. I'm Still Not Over You ( A Kevin FF) BRAND NEW Prologue up 8/28!!!!  

I really like it!!!

Please PMS!!!

I'm already hooked LOL


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Awe thanks do much! You two totally just made my day! So for you guys, chapter one is on it's way! I'm just proof reading the first chapter, then I promise it will be up. 


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woot yay!!!

haha I'm hyped up today =]


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Re: P.S. I'm Still Not Over You ( A Kevin FF) BRAND NEW Prologue up 8/28!!!!  

Chapter One

 

Don’t look back got a new direction

I loved you once needed protection

You’re still apart of everything I do

You’re on my heart just like a tattoo

Just like a tattoo, I’ll always have you

 

            Life for Riley post Kevin Jonas was ordinary to say the least.  She was a full time student at Arizona State University in Tempe, Arizona, who worked part-time as a cake decorator at her best friend’s bakery in downtown Phoenix.  She had a small two bedroom apartment which she shared with her fiancé, Nate, and her best friend, Melissa. The life she was leading was not of the glitz and glamour she dreamt about as a little girl.

 

            She threw her school bag onto the table as she stepped foot into her home. It was relatively hot inside the apartment which meant Nate had once again turned down the air conditioning in order to save on the electricity bill. 

            “It saves us money and the environment too,” he had said when she complained about it being unbearable in the apartment when it was still 95 degrees outside. She of course had rolled her eyes and avoided the confrontation that would have followed if she hadn’t removed herself from the situation.  She went through the mail separating it into three piles, before taking hers into her bedroom.  Bills, bills, letter from mom and more bills.

            “It never stops, does it,” she asked to her dog, Pebbles, who had realized she was finally home. The white terrier just licked her face and laid down beside her.  Just like every day in her life, she threw the mail on the bed and changed into some ratty old jeans and a comfortable tee-shirt for work.  The wardrobe of a cake decorator had to be comfortable, not fashionable.  She gave Pebbles a little pat on the head before swinging her purse on her shoulder and leaving for work.

           

            “You’re late.”

            “Save it, Melissa.  You know I’ll be late to my own funeral.” Riley threw her purse in her cubby space, before putting on her icing stained apron.

            “How was school?”

            “What are you my mom now? It sucked, like usual. I just can’t wait for it to be over with.” Melissa patted her on the back as they walked to the front of the store to check the recent cake orders.   The two young women went through each one, talking about the coloring and ideas they had to spice up some of the duller cakes. 

            “Oh you know what,” Melissa said jumping down off the counter she had been sitting on, “I have one cake order that needs to be done tonight.  It came in via email from the site. It’s a full sheet with Happy Birthday Kevin on it.”

            “That’s it,” Riley asked snatching the order form from Melissa to look it over.

            “Nope wait, there’s a logo on it. It’s this fancy design with the letters JB in it.” The two girls moved their heads side to side trying to figure out what it meant, but failed to come up with anything. 

            “Well okay then. I’m going to work on this and get it out of the way.” With that Riley took the cake order and walked off to her work bench. The quicker she got this stuff finished, the sooner she got to go home and relax. It was finally Friday which meant no more school for the rest of the week and only a few hours working here and there.

            The JB logo cake was a real simple one.  Riley put together the full sheet yellow cake with chocolate pudding filling with vanilla whipped topping.  The only thing that bothered her was how vague they were about where they wanted everything. She took out a small round tip pastry bag and filled it black (or as black as she could make her grey icing.) She slowly drew the logo by hand until she had a huge cake with a gigantic JB logo on it with Happy Birthday Kevin circling the logo.  She backed up and admired her work. 

            “Not too shabby,” she said wiping a few stray pieces of hair from her forehead, “Now the hard part, getting it into the box.” She called out for her best friend and together the girls put it into the box and brought it out to the front for pick up.  

           

            The rest of the day went by quickly as the two girls joked around while filling the cake and pastry cases that surrounded the front of the bakery.

            “So how are you and Nate doing,” Melissa asked passing her a black and white mousse cake, “I never get to ask because he’s always around at home.”

            “We’re good, I guess.”  Melissa eyed her suspiciously but decided to not pursue the issue any further.  She knew that when Riley needed to talk about something she would, not sense trying to pry it out of her prematurely.  The two girls worked in silence until the door chime ran through out the store.   

            “Hi and welcome to Yummy In My Tummy bakery creations! How can I help you?” Riley heard the usual greeting from Melissa and paid no attention.

            “Hi I’m here to pick up a full sheet cake that says Happy Birthday Kevin on it. Riley had her head in the pastry case rearranging some of the desserts when that voice hit her like a ton of bricks.  She slammed her head into the glass as she tried to get out of the case before the person with the voice recognized her.  Too late.

            “Riley?” the voice said peering into the opposite side of the case.  Riley winced and brought herself up to face a ghost of her past.

            “Mrs. Jonas?”

            “Oh my goodness! How have you been? How’s mom?  How’s life? We never hear from you anymore!” Riley politely nodded her head and gave a slight smile. This was not what she needed right now.  She loved Mrs. Jonas to death but that part of her life was over and she really just needed to go home and go back to bed.

            “Everyone and everything is great.”

            “Glad to hear it.  Listen I have to run but you’ll be hearing from me soon! We really do need to catch up!” Riley watched as Mrs. Jonas exited the bakery.

            “Who was that,” Melissa asked poking Riley out of stare.

            “That….that was…”

            “Okay seriously spill it,” she said impatiently tapping her foot on the cement floor.

            “That was my Kevin’s mom.”

Melissa’s eyes widened and her mouth hung open, “Holy Cannoli.”  


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*gasp*

PMS please

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Re: P.S. I'm Still Not Over You ( A Kevin FF) BRAND NEW Prologue up 8/28!!!!  

I'm hooked. This is really good!

More soon please

 
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