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 8/29/2008 11:07 PM
 
 Modified By wicked_cool  on 8/14/2009 9:09:43 AM

So I'm posting this tonight because Fire told me too and I need some cheering up, so happy comments would be much appreciated.
This is my new fic and I'm posting a blurb. (I didn't call it a prologue, because if I get a postive feedback, I'd post the prologue next.)

Welcome Everyone! new and old.

comment!

~Belles <3 [is eating vanilla ice cream]

Unbelievable


Unbelievable. It's a word I'm sure you've all heard. And I'm sure you've heard it said many different ways. The frustrated way your mother says it as she runs her fingers through her hair because you've refused to help with chores yet again. The way your little brother would say it in pure awe after seeing his first magic show. The shocked, excited way you said it after your first roller coaster ride. The breathless way it crosses your lips after your first kiss.

Even though unbelievable is so diverse I never thought it would be the one word that would describe my whole life. The one word that in all it's many uses, would fit all the events that have occurred. And how incredibly unbelievable it all was.

Unbelievable. Who my best friend was.

Unbelievable. How perfect my life seemed.

Unbelievable. How quickly it took a turn for the worse.

Unbelievable. When I found myself falling for not one, but two guys.

Unbelievable. When one of those guys happened to have a girlfriend.

Unbelievable. How his girlfriend was my ex-best friend.

Everything seemed absolutely, Unbelievable.

And all I hoped for through the whole ordeal was a happy ending.

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 8/29/2008 11:10 PM
 

BELLES I AM SO EXCITED TO READ THIS you dont even know!!!!! ahhhh ahhh ahhh amazing :) cant wait for more!!!!


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 8/29/2008 11:11 PM
 
 Modified By lindsay91  on 8/29/2008 9:13:09 PM

Holy cow Belles this is UNBELIEVABLE! I am in love with this story already and I can not wait for more. I am hooked like Nick is hooked to Diet Dr. Pepper and chocolate. Yeah!

Strawberry [is soooo psyched!]


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 8/29/2008 11:13 PM
 

Hey comment people! :)


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 8/29/2008 11:14 PM
 

lindsay[do you wanna get away?] wrote

Holy cow Belles this is UNBELIEVABLE! I am in love with this story already and I can not wait for more. I am hooked like Nick is hooked to Diet Dr. Pepper and chocolate. Yeah!

Strawberry [is soooo psyched!]

i am extremely happy to see that you fixed the spelling of the word 'psyched' in this post. :)


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Thanks Amanda for the siggies!

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 8/29/2008 11:17 PM
 

Haha very funny. I suck at spelling and that is why Nick shall tutor me in spelling and John Taylor will tutor me in guitar. So I get the best of both words baby. :)


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 8/29/2008 11:17 PM
 

Yay Belles!

This is gonna be so amazing! I can't wait for it, and the characters and who it is gonna be about.

Eeeeep!

-Fire <33


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 8/29/2008 11:18 PM
 

Whoa; that blurb was unbelievable. Haha, excuse the awful pun. I've been making a lot of those lately. Anyway, this sounds really good :]

- Jay.


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 8/29/2008 11:19 PM
 

lindsay[do you wanna get away?] wrote

Haha very funny. I suck at spelling and that is why Nick shall tutor me in spelling and John Taylor will tutor me in guitar. So I get the best of both words baby. :)

haha good plan. i believe i was the one who came up with thattttt one :)


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 8/29/2008 11:20 PM
 

Which makes you a genius and me an idiot haha.


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 8/29/2008 11:21 PM
 

jasmine jade. wrote

Whoa; that blurb was unbelievable. Haha, excuse the awful pun. I've been making a lot of those lately. Anyway, this sounds really good :]

- Jay.

Hahaha, that was brilliant!


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