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New Post 8/31/2008 12:37 AM
User is offline iBreatheJB [congrats on your 1st AMA boys!]
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NEW!!!!! When The Stars Dont Shine [A Kevin FanFic] 
Modified By iBreatheJB [congrats on your 1st AMA boys!]  on 8/30/2008 10:47:46 PM)

ok, so ive never written on here before, but i thought i would give it a try and see how you guys liked it =]

chapter 1

she shivered. the dampness of the night shot through her like a needle scraping her bones. she wiped the tears from her eyes and looked up at the rainy night sky. it was like the whole earth felt the pain in her sould and was mourning with her. lonliness hung on her like a dark, heavy blanket, and there were no stars in the sky that maybe. just maybe she could make a wish and have the pain disappear. she fell to her knees and lifted her face up letting the dropplets wash over her skin. the cold rain sent tingles through her entire body. she burried her face in her hands and once again started sobbing. In that moment she felt the warmth and gentle strength of another body bending down against hers, holding her and pulling her close. she knew those hands, she knew that smell. it could only be one person.

 

to be continued...

 

tell me if you like it so far
and keep bumping it please =]


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New Post 8/31/2008 12:39 AM
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Re: NEW!!!!! When The Stars Dont Shine [A Kevin FanFic] 

can you say amzing???
seriously so so good

PMS!!


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New Post 8/31/2008 12:42 AM
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Re: NEW!!!!! When The Stars Dont Shine [A Kevin FanFic] 

Dude, talk about a ridiculously good intro. That was really descriptive. pms, :]

- Jay.


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New Post 8/31/2008 12:44 AM
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Re: NEW!!!!! When The Stars Dont Shine [A Kevin FanFic] 

that was amazing!

i can't wait to read more :]


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New Post 8/31/2008 12:49 AM
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Re: NEW!!!!! When The Stars Dont Shine [A Kevin FanFic] 

thanks guys! =]

i really appreciate the amazing comments =]
Im working on more and i will post more soon!

keep this thread bumped for meee =]


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New Post 9/1/2008 7:37 PM
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Re: NEW!!!!! When The Stars Dont Shine [A Kevin FanFic] 

 

 

 

 

here is the continuation...
i will be posting more very soon =] keep reading, the story gets more exciting!

 

 

She managed to catch a breath and speak through her tears, “Kevin?” she squeezed out, her voice was airy and thin. “Yeah baby, I’m here, you’ll be ok” he lifted his hand and gently wiped a tear from her eye. ”You miss them, don’t you” Kevin said. She managed to nod her head. “C’mon, let me take you home”. Kevin stood up, pulling her off the cold, wet ground and forcing her to stand. Her knees gave way, and her body fell limp into his arms. Kevin’s quick and strong arms held and steadied her, not letting her fall. He scooped up her soaked, petite body and grasped it, holding her close to his chest. He pulled the hood of the oversized bowling sweatshirt he had given her on their first date over her head, and shielded her face from the rain. The walk seemed like an eternity, like a dark, endless hall with no light at the end. The rain pelted Kevin constantly, like bullets, and stung his face. He trudged, jeans and shoes soaked all the way through. He looked up for a split second, long enough to see a small glimmer of light that shone softly in the distance. The bus. He mustered up strength and ran, never loosening his grip on her body. As soon as he set foot on the bus steps, it felt like a huge load had been lifted off his back and set him free. The bus was quiet, everyone was asleep and the only sound you could hear was Kevin panting, gasping for air. He looked down at his girlfriend, she was out cold. Kevin ran his hand across her tear stained face. He held her in his arms and just sat there watching her, loving her, wishing he could make her pain go away. He leaned down to her and whispered in her ear, “I love you Lissie.” The clock ticked late into the night. No matter how hard he fought, Kevin couldn’t keep his eyes open. His eyelids were getting heavier and heavier with every moment that passed. His head was nodding and swaying and he couldn’t fight it any more. His body made up its mind, it had to sleep.


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New Post 9/2/2008 2:21 PM
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Re: NEW!!!!! When The Stars Dont Shine [A Kevin FanFic] 

bumperzzz


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New Post 9/14/2008 10:27 PM
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Re: NEW!!!!! When The Stars Dont Shine [A Kevin FanFic] 

I love it, it's absolutely fantastic and you're amazing with description

Can't wait for more

xoxo jbella

 

 

 

 

 
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