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betterintime

Prologue - Look how much time was wasted.
 

            The buzzing streets of Times Squares at Christmas couldn’t get anymore busier. I snuggled my nose into my plaid scarf walking through the night. Even at night the lights were still on, and busier than ever. People with briefcases rushed through me, Bells rang, and carolers walked past. I shoved my hands into the pockets of my black trenched coat as gust of wind attacked my face; I tightened my scarf, walking to my destination. Finally, I reached to where I wanted to go, it was the only place I could let out my feelings. I wasn’t the kind of person  who opened up once you asked me to. I opened the door, closing it behind me. I sighed seeing no one here was typical. I walked into the grand ballroom, I slipped out of my scarf and my purple beanie kufi hat off, I put it down on the white grand piano. I slid my fingers on the keys. I sat on the stool, One finger on a key, then another. Soon I was playing a soft melody. It was the only thing, I could let me feelings out to. The sound that the piano makes, it gives me strength. I hummed.

 

You were the voice
Who kept me strong.
You were the melody
So beautiful and long.
But now, your gone.

And I never got the chance..
To say..
 
 

A tear rolled down, my cheek as I sang the last word. I couldn’t keep living this way. I tucked a lock of my hair beneath my ear, staring into space. I couldn’t help but rest my head onto the white piano and cry my heart out. For the first time, in years.

 
 

Everything happens for a reason. Things are let go, so better things flow in place. No one would have guessed what happened a few years from now.

 
 

[A/N:  yeh. i didn't really intend to post this up here, but  my friend Libby was like omg post. so yeahh. i needed some critism and feedback or something. this is the first FF posted on this site by me. And that verse was written by me, real quick. dont steal without permission. thanks. um well. i decided to have the mood sad. i dont know why. i just had that feeling XD. what do you think? I have chapter 1, 2. but i just need some comments. then i'll post the other chapters up. thanks ♥]

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New Post 8/31/2008 8:32 AM
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Oo I'm liking, PMS!

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New Post 8/31/2008 2:22 PM
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Re: Better in Time [NEW !] 

yay. a reader (:

before i leave for shopping bump.


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New Post 8/31/2008 2:27 PM
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Re: Better in Time [NEW !] 

ahhhhh i liked it so sad ='[

PMS please =]


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New Post 8/31/2008 2:32 PM
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Re: Better in Time [NEW !] 

PMN BEFORE I EAT YOU.  :D  It's really good...and I'm not gonna eat anyone don't worry, hehe.

 

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New Post 8/31/2008 2:35 PM
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Re: Better in Time [NEW !] 

WOW

I cant beleive that you just came up with that verse real fast

it is so good

I am serioulsy in awe

you are so descriptive

this story is gonna be amazing please PMS!!!


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New Post 8/31/2008 2:37 PM
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AGREED!  ^^


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New Post 8/31/2008 3:15 PM
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me likey :) POST MORE SOON PLEASE


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New Post 8/31/2008 6:09 PM
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Re: Better in Time [NEW !] 

you guys are amazing. readers <3 make me feel so good [: heres chapter 1.

 

betterintime

 01 - Say goodbye. La la la
 

 

     I slid my fingers on the piano once more, before getting up checking my watch. I quickly put on my hat, and scarf opening the door as a gust of wind flew by. I rushed out into the busy streets of Times square. I was in a rush to get back home as soon as possible. I bumped into someone, causing me to fall on the ground. I groaned annoyed, but I couldn’t get up, I was frozen on the ground. To see who I bumped into. He stared at me with his big brown eyes, stuttering while speaking.
    “I’m so sorry!” He held out his hand, with a look of worry as to see I couldn’t get up. I took his hand. I realized who it was. It was Nicholas Jonas.

Nick’s POV

     My eyes met her green eyes, something about this girl made me warm up inside. She took my hand. I helped her up. She brushed off the dirt off her trench coat, before speaking.
      “Thank you,” She said, I could see her cheeks were rosy red. I didn’t know if she was blushing or it was the weather. I looked at her up and down, studying her every move. She had dark brown wavy hair, she had on a purple beanie kufi hat that covered her head, Her eyes were forest green, and she looked like she had been crying, that stabbed me in the heart to see she was crying, I don’t know why but it just did. Her cheeks rosy red, and her lips were pale pink. She had a plaid scraf on, and a black trench coat, with baby blue jeans on and a pair of uggs. She adjusted her scarf, before shuffling in her ugg boots. She was so beautiful, but her eyes were filled with sorrow. I could tell she had a bad day or something.
     “I’m Nick,” I said, breaking the awkward silence. I held out my gloved hand. She looked up, meeting my gaze.
      “I know who you are, my sister has a billion posters in her room. Gets kind of creepy walking in there now,” A smile crept up her lips. I could feel my body warm up at her smile. “Vanessa,” She took my hand, shaking it. I could feel the warmth immediately. “I’m sorry I have to go, It’s been great meeting you Nick,” She gave me a slight smile. I nodded. She slowly walked away.
     “Will we see each other again.. ?” I said, holding her arm. She turned around.
      “Something like that,” She said, giving me a smile. I let go of her arm, turning around watching her walk away into the busy crowd.
     “OHMIGOD!! IT’S NICK JONAS!” Someone shouted. Crap. I quickly texted Big Rob, and he was next to me in seconds, fighting the screaming girls off.

Vanessa’s POV

     I heard a scream from the back of me, I giggled quietly walking quickly to call a cab to go back home. I got into the cab, whispering my address to him. I sighed sitting back and wondering if I’ll actually see that boy again. It’s possible. I searched my bag for my Blackberry, I quickly texted my best friend, Ashley.
 

           I just met Nick Jonas, and he wants to see me again (:
          <3Vanessa.

            Seconds later, a text poped up.

 

            OHMIGOD! Details when you get home.

             (: Ashley
 

There was a sudden spark when they met, and it changed their lives forever.

 

[A/N: the mood got brighter (: oh what nicholas does to girls. ♥]


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New Post 8/31/2008 6:17 PM
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Re: Better in Time [NEW !] updated 31/08 
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