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New Post 8/31/2008 9:31 PM
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A Little Bit Longer [One-shot] 

My fictional take on the day Nick wrote the song. Enjoy!

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Today was a day from hell for Nick Jonas.

Okay, maybe not really, but Nick couldn't remember a day worse than this one.

It started when he woke up. He somehow forgot that he was in a bunk and managed to bang his head on the top of his bunk.... twice. Rubbing his head as he got out of bed he looked at his watch, which told him he was going to be late for rehearsal. He made a note to thank Joe and Kevin for waking him up, with so much time to spare.
Rehearsal was horrible. Nick's voice was strained causing his voice to crack on the first four songs. He managed to break three guitar strings and cut his finger. Not exactly the day he was hoping for. He reluctantly made it through the rest of rehearsal before retiring to the tour bus.
He threw himself into his bunk and stared at the blank white ceiling above him. Sighing, Nick ran his hand through his curls. He heard his mother call out to him that he needed to check his blood sugar soon.
Nick slowly got out of his bunk fumbling around to find the needle. Nick felt the slight prick and watched the ruby red blood slowly bubble out from his finger. While watching the blood and waiting for the results, Nick thought back to the day he found out.
An array of words raced through his mind.
Diabetes
 
Insulin
 
Treatment
 
Results
 
Waiting for more testing
 
The memory of the sterile hospital room still sent shivers up his spine. Nick was tired of it all. He was tired of the diabetes. He wanted to give up, but he didn't. Eight words continued to save Nick each day and keep him smiling.
At that moment a baseline formed in his head. He began to hum to the tune as the words appeared in his mind.
He grabbed paper and a pencil to write the words out.
He knew what the chorus would be, what would tie the song together.
His mantra, the pearls of wisdom keeping him going.
 
A little bit longer, and I'll be fine.....

One Year


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New Post 8/31/2008 9:39 PM
User is offline Kate [[Is Bored Out Of Her Mind]]
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Re: A Little Bit Longer [One-shot] 

i love your stories even if they are on one-shots you just write so well

-Kate {{is hoping youll write something longer soon}}


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New Post 8/31/2008 9:40 PM
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Re: A Little Bit Longer [One-shot] 

 Kate [[Is Bored Out Of Her Mind]] wrote

i love your stories even if they are on one-shots you just write so well

-Kate {{is hoping youll write something longer soon}}

I most definitely am going to try.

:)

Bubbles


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New Post 8/31/2008 9:40 PM
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Re: A Little Bit Longer [One-shot] 

I liked it but I wish it was a little bit longer (no pun intended) but it was still good.

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New Post 8/31/2008 9:43 PM
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 lindsay[do you wanna get away?] wrote

I liked it but I wish it was a little bit longer (no pun intended) but it was still good.

Strawberry

That still cracked me up.

Thanks Strawberry. I know it was a little short. The next one will probably end up being huge.

:)

Bubbles


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New Post 8/31/2008 9:44 PM
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Re: A Little Bit Longer [One-shot] 

That was really great Bubbles!  I liked that it was simple.

-Hannah aka Shmellow [thinks she is actually going to do her homework]


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New Post 8/31/2008 9:46 PM
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 Shmellow [misses summer] wrote

That was really great Bubbles!  I liked that it was simple.

-Hannah aka Shmellow [thinks she is actually going to do her homework]

Thank you m'dear.

:)

And I think you should go do your homework too. But then come back to us!

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New Post 8/31/2008 9:48 PM
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Re: A Little Bit Longer [One-shot] 

 alicia wrote

 lindsay[do you wanna get away?] wrote

I liked it but I wish it was a little bit longer (no pun intended) but it was still good.

Strawberry

 

That still cracked me up.

Thanks Strawberry. I know it was a little short. The next one will probably end up being huge.

:)

Bubbles


that sounds awesome go for huge, go for multi-chapter hugeness

Kate


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New Post 8/31/2008 9:49 PM
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Re: A Little Bit Longer [One-shot] 

 Kate [[Is Bored Out Of Her Mind]] wrote

 alicia wrote

 

 lindsay[do you wanna get away?] wrote

I liked it but I wish it was a little bit longer (no pun intended) but it was still good.

Strawberry

 

That still cracked me up.

Thanks Strawberry. I know it was a little short. The next one will probably end up being huge.

:)

Bubbles

 


that sounds awesome go for huge, go for multi-chapter hugeness

Kate

Haha, definitely.

:)

Bubbles


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New Post 8/31/2008 9:55 PM
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Re: A Little Bit Longer [One-shot] 

Twinny/Bubbles/Alicia,

That was so touching. I guess because I sorta know what he's going through. Ok, so I know what he's going through, which is why that song means so much to me. And that's why HE means so much to me.

I love how you took his original story and made it your own. So creative =]

Loved it Twinny. =]


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