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New Post 9/11/2008 6:35 PM
User is offline ♥Keri Sanoj♥ [You don't know how bad it feels]
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I Miss You (oneshot for Carlie) 
-Song- I Miss You by Miley Cyrus

You used to call me your angel
Said I was sent straight down from heaven

You held me close in your arms
I love the way you felt so strong

"Hows my little angel?" Kevin Jonas said to his daughter, Carlie.
"Great, daddy!" The girl replied. She was only 7 years old.
Kevin hugged his little girl as tightly as he could without breaking her spine. She felt so secure in his warm embrace.

I never wanted you to leave
I wanted you to stay here holdin' me


"What is it Mom?" Carlie said. Mrs. Jonas had tears in her eyes.
"Daddy's very sick."
"With what?"
"They don't know.
She was now 13 years old.
"Is he gonna..."
"He might."
______

"Dad!" Carlie said to her ailing father.
"Carlie." He tried to sit up in his hospital bed, but was too weak.She hugged him tightly as she could, the tears streaming down her face.
"Honey, I'll be okay."
"I hope."

I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear
Every once in a while


"Carlie." Mrs. Jonas said to her daughter, her eyes wet with teardrops.
"Uh-huh?" But she already knew what it meant.
"Is?" Carlie said. Mrs Jonas slightly nodded her head.The tears fell down like rain.

And even though it's different now
You're still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you
Sha la la la la
I miss you


That night, Carlie couldn't sleep. She stayed up all night crying.
________________

Carlie sat at the table, playing with her food.
"Carlie, baby, I know you miss him, but you haven't eaten in 3 days. You have to eat something." Her mother replied
"I'm not hungry."
"Please?" Carlie picked up her fork and shoved a bite of food in her mouth.

You used to call me your dreamer
And now I'm livin' out my dream
Oh how I wish that you could see
Everything that's happenin' to me

I'm thinking back on the past
It's true that time is flying by too fast

When her father died, Carlie spent practically the rest of the next 2 years in  her room, writing songs about her pain. It turns out, a record company discovered her.
"You ready for the show?" Carlie's mother said to her.
"This one's for dad." She replied.
"He would be so proud of you." She hugged her daughter and kissed her forehead.

I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You're still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you
Sha la la la la
I miss you


I know you're in a better place
Still I wish that I could see your face oh
I know you're were you need to be
Even if it's not here with me


6 years later Carlie got married, but she never forgot about her dad. He was the most important person in her family to her, and it meant everything for her mom to bring a picture of him to the wedding and sit it next to her.

I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You're still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you
Sha la la la la
I miss you


I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You're still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you
Sha la la la la
I miss you


The End


^^Credit goes to Laura for the Kevin siggy!
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New Post 9/11/2008 6:46 PM
User is offline geminisrock
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Re: I Miss You (oneshot for Carlie) 

that was sad :( but it was a good one-shot though


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New Post 9/11/2008 7:10 PM
User is offline luckieCrystal323 [♥]
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Re: I Miss You (oneshot for Carlie) 

aw that was so sad...
but it was amazing.
i loved it.


My Stories and Joint Stories
Who's The Dog?
Childhood Memories Turn To Teenage Woes (CSKS Joint)
Something in the Music (joint with Ashley and Corinne)
Captured In The Moment {Kevin ff}
My Oneshots
 
New Post 9/11/2008 7:14 PM
User is offline Hey, Stephani!♥[He Bit My Neck & Stole My Heart♥ Emmett]
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Re: I Miss You (oneshot for Carlie) 

KEVIN DIED tears up.
No.... not kevin... kill... um.... JOE.
wait... that's not a good idea either.
KILL MY BROTHER.

NOT KEVIN


Funny(s) of the week:

"Your mom is awesome."
"Don't talk about my mother!"
"Okay."


cause we are vegetables. & that's just the way we roll.
 
New Post 9/11/2008 9:24 PM
User is offline LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You}
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Re: I Miss You (oneshot for Carlie) 

OMG

that was amzing

Iam so sorry I didn't comment

sooner

I was at powderpuff

but OMG

I literally started to choke up, thank you so so much!!


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New Post 9/12/2008 1:52 PM
User is offline ♥Keri Sanoj♥ [You don't know how bad it feels]
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Re: I Miss You (oneshot for Carlie) 

Thank you guys it means so much.


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