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New Post 9/14/2008 9:40 PM
User is offline LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You}
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Black and Blue (New Nick FF) Chapter 9!!!....NEEDS READERS 
Modified By LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You}  on 10/10/2008 2:47:50 PM)

Ok guy sorry about this, but the last thread will not work..so I have decided to post the first two chapters here. Third times teh charm? I am really really sorry guys....IDK whats up....but please read and comment

CHAPTER 1

"Nick don't touch me," she screamed.

"Kev tell Nick to stop poking me with the stick," she said running over to Kevin grabbing his arm. Her name was Lauren, and she had been our neighbor for as long as I could remember. She had long brown almost black curly hair. It was pulled to the side with a blue flower that matched her gorgeous blue eyes. She wore a light blue flowery sun dress that layed right at her knees, with a pair of white sandals and frilly white socks. She always looked so pretty.

"Nick stop poking Lauren," Kev said grabbing heron the shoulder, and staring me down.

"You know Kev your only 10, you can't tell us what to do," Joe piped in running away from Sofie. Sofie was our long time friend form church and Lauren's best friend.

"Joe shut up," Joe stopped din his tracks sliding on the dirt.

"O, Im telling mom."

"No don't," Kevin started chasing Joe, hopping to tackle him before he got to our mom.

Sofie stooped about two inches before she hit Lauren, and gave her a big hug.

"I made you something," Sofie said handing Lauren a big crinkled up piece of paper. Lauren took it and started to unravel it. It was two people walking hand in hand.

"Who is it," Lauren asked

"It's you and Nick.....sittin in a tree K.I.S.S...."

"Stop," Lauren said chasing Sofie right out of our yard.

"Lauren what happened to your arm," I said staring at a black and blue bruise the looked kinda like a hand print.

"I fell out of that tree," she said pointing to nothing.

"O, you fall alot," I said walking over to her.

"Lauren, home now," a voice echoed form her house.

"Ok," she screamed.

"See ya Nick."

"Lauren I said now," it was her dad. He was very mean and always scared me.

"I have to go now, bye," she said while running into her front door.

I had just turned six, and I loved my house, my friends, basically everything I had. I didn't know how my life could get much better

 

 

"Nicholas were home," my mom said shaking my shoulder. I stretched out my arm holding my pillow hitting Joe right in the face.

"Joe, wake up were home."

"No,I don't want to be home."

"Joe, up, now," Kevin said kicking the side of Joe's mattress.

"Fine, but if I'm not beautiful it's all your fault."

"Whatever Joe," I said climbing out of my bed, and out of the bus. Finally, I was back home. I saw my beautiful old house, as the cold air hit me in the face. We had just finished our Burning Up Tour, and I was so ready to be back home in New Jersey. Paparazii cameras flashed everywhere, but I saw someone a familiar face in the huge crowd.

"Lauren," I yelled in a questionable way. She turned her attention twoards me, and a huge toothy grin spread across her face. She walked forward her long brown hair was straightened, and she wore an electric blue dress with black leggings that grazed over her petite figure. Here eyes sparkled a deep blue color that was mezmorizing. She wore high heels that made her a little bit taller, but not much. She was only 4'11, but still beautiful. As she walked towards me her hair blew in the wind, and her eyes filled with tears. She started to pick up the pace until finally she ran right into my arms. I wrapped my arms around her, as the feeling of her touching me sent chills down my spine. I felt like we were the only two people in the world. I hadn't seen her in almost 5 years, but I had fallen for her, hard.

After about two minutes of sitting and huging. I let my arms losing up from her, and my arms grabbed her shoulders and I pushed her back from me. I looked at her from head to toe, not knowing what to say, she was absolutely gorgeous there was no denying that. I was just so shocked at how much she was able to change in 5 years. She looked at me right in my eyes,with her beautiful smile across her face.

I leaned in and whispered in her ear"Lets go get coffee."

She nodded as I put my arm around her leading her into the car, next thing I knew we were at the coffee shop ordering. I hadn't taken my eyes off of her the whole time as she recapped what happened in the last five years.

" So My mom died about 2 years ago," I stopped her right there.

"What," I said shocked,"your mom died, what happened?"

"Ummm.......well.....It was kind of a freak accident, she fell down the stairs and broke her neck."

I didn't really believe what she was saying, but I didn't really want to get into it. I could see the tears swelling up in her eyes, this was obviously hard for her.

"So now do you just live with your dad," I asked.

"Yup"

All of a sudden her phone rang. It played Hello Beautiful. I got a huge smile across my face, as she began to blush. She looked down at her phone and her smile turned into a frown.

"Speaking of the devil," she got up from her chair walking over to the door. She looked so gorgeous. I watched her as her beautiful figure swayed from side to side while she walked . She started to make had motions, and yell into the phone. She slammed it shut and walked over. I couldn't tell what she was saying, but there was no smile across her face now.

"I have to go," she said grabbing her stuff quick.

"Why," I said standing up, and looking shocked.

"I just , I just," she said trying to grab her stuff quickly. I grabbed her arm, and she turned and looked at me in a shocked way. Tears were forming in her eyes. There was something the matter, but I knew she didn't want to talk about it.

"I'll walk you home," I said. A huge smile grew across her face, as I intertwined my fingers with hers. I felt like I was exactly were I was supposed to be.Paparazii flashed there cameras as we walked out the door. Screaming at me asking me who the new girl was. I ignored them, it was like it was just me and Lauren in my own little world, and that was exactly were I wanted to be.

 

10 Years Later


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New Post 9/14/2008 9:52 PM
User is offline LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You}
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Re: Black and Blue (New Nick FF) Chapter 2....NEEDS READERS 

CHAPTER 2

I walked into my house. Thoughts ran through my mind as soon as I left Lauren by her door step. Memories of me and lauren, and the fear of what she could possibly be hiding from me. I had never seen her so scared and worried in my life.

As the door swung open I saw a glimpse of Joe in the kitchen. Slowly I made my way to it, focusing on Ashley sitting on the counter. Her long dark brown hair hung freely around her body. She was wearing jean shorts and a lose fitting colbalt blut tank top, that brougt out her bright blue eyes. Ashely was one of the funniest girls I had ever met in my life. Her and Joe had been dating for 1 year and were identical when it came to personality. Except, unlike Joe, Ashley could be one of the best listeners.

Her eyes shined when she looked at me, but slowly the huge smile that was acroos her face, turned to concern. Somehow she could always read me inside and out. She was just one of those girls.

She jumped down, her slim 5'5 figure walking twoards me, but before she could say a word, I turned and walked into the livingroom. There I found Kevin on the couch. His curly hair overtook his head as he looked down smilling at a 5'3 girl laying on his lap. It was Bailey. Her and Kevin had been dating for 2 years, and were basically inseperable.

Her brown eyes gazed up into Kevin's. Her wavy brown hair layed across his legs, and he intertwined it in his fingers. I ran over and jumped on her legs.

"Nick!!Ouch!!!," she yelped.

"Hey Nick, whats up," Kevin asked, still playing with Bailey's hair.

Bailey wiggled her way out from under my legs, and leaned her back against Kevin's shoulder.

"Nothing," I said looking down at my feet.

"So, how's La.......," Kevin was suddenly cut off by Ashley.

"Nicholas Jerry Jonas, don't walk away from me when I am about to talk to you," Ashley said barging in placing her hand on her hip, with Joe not far behind.

"Yea braw, if ya know whats good for ya, don't mess wit my girl," he said trying to show attitude by placing his hands on his hips.

Ashley just rolled her eys

"Joe, shut up," Kevin said wraping his arms around Bailey, and pulling her into his chest.

"Nicholas, what is the matter? And don't lie," Ashley said glaring at me.

"Yea don't lie," Joe said walking up behind Ashley, wrapping his arms around her waist, and resting his head gently on her shoulder. Her hands moved up from her hip, and her arms crossed. She raised one eye brow waiting for my reply.

"Welll.....," suddenly I heard a knock on the door. I jumped up.

"Thank God," I mummbled under my breathe.

I walked to the door. The tension was so high in the room, you could cut it with a butter knife. I started to turn the knob, and open the door, when all of a sudden it was pushed on to me, knocking me backwards and hitting my nose into it. I shut the door, and turned around a little stunned.

"Sofie?," I said shocked.

"Did ya miss me," she said putting her hands in the air and striking a pose. Slowly she lowered them down, stretching them out, and waiting for a hug.

"You have no idea," I said grabbing her and pulling her into me whispering in her ear,"I need to talk to you."

She pushed herself out away from my body and looked me in the eyes with concern.

"What's the matter?"


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New Post 9/14/2008 10:06 PM
User is offline LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You}
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Re: Black and Blue (New Nick FF) Chapter 2....NEEDS READERS 

BUMP!!!


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New Post 9/14/2008 10:38 PM
User is offline LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You}
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Re: Black and Blue (New Nick FF) Chapter 2....NEEDS READERS 

BUMPERS....ANYBODY??


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New Post 9/14/2008 10:41 PM
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Re: Black and Blue (New Nick FF) Chapter 2....NEEDS READERS 

this is really good carlie! post more soon =)


 
New Post 9/14/2008 10:51 PM
User is offline LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You}
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Re: Black and Blue (New Nick FF) Chapter 2....NEEDS READERS 

aww thanks Alexis!!!!

I am gonna post chappie 3 tomorrow unless I get a bunch of people 2night to comment!!


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New Post 9/14/2008 11:03 PM
User is offline LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You}
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Re: Black and Blue (New Nick FF) Chapter 2....NEEDS READERS 

ONE LAST BUMP!!!


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New Post 9/14/2008 11:17 PM
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Re: Black and Blue (New Nick FF) Chapter 2....NEEDS READERS 
Modified By LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You}  on 9/14/2008 9:48:51 PM)

anyone else before i go to bed?


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New Post 9/14/2008 11:49 PM
User is offline LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You}
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Re: Black and Blue (New Nick FF) Chapter 2....NEEDS READERS 

nope?

ok well next chappie up tomorrow!!!


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New Post 9/15/2008 1:05 AM
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Re: Black and Blue (New Nick FF) Chapter 2....NEEDS READERS 

i am luvin this story!!!!!!!!

idk y no body is commenting

this story rrrrooxxxxxxxx!!!!!!!!!

post more plz!!!!!!


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