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New Post 9/15/2008 5:14 PM
User is offline IRollMadDeepYo
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When I Grow Up [Futuristc Joe Fanfic] 
Modified By IRollMadDeepYo  on 9/17/2008 6:58:10 PM)

 

 

Before you read this I would just like to mention that this fanfiction is based on the Ugly series by Scott Westerfeld.

 

The future is a subject often spoke about. People of all ages, shapes and sizes ponder about how life is going to be when their bodies are six feet under and the memories they helped create are long forgotten. There are even people out there trying to create the future.

I know how the future looks for you. In fact, I helped change the future. I’m not from the twenty first century, I’m from the year 3506. I’m from a world where we control evolution, where we help create evolution. In my world there are no wars, no prejudice and definitely no global warming. I’m from the race that cured the cancer that was eating away at the earth, the cancer being your generation.

In my world we don’t have ground cars and we don’t burn oil to keep warm. My world has magnetic forces that keep our hover cars in the air, my world has a system that never gets viruses. We survive without a special gas that can kill a million people with one hit and without machines that shoot lumps of metal out of them.

But the biggest improvement in our world is the way our people look. We’re born into a world where children only live with their parents until they’re ten and then we get taken to ugly town. At ten we start to lose our childish good looks and we start growing into a ugly teenagers. We’re kept to a specific side of town where we learn about world history and how to behave. At sixteen we’re taken across town to have an operation which changes the way we look. Our imperfections are erased and our faces are made biologically pretty. We’re given big eyes and full lips, sharp jaw lines and glossy hair. Our immune system is boosted so we rarely get ill and our bones are made stronger so they don’t break. Over our life time we’ll have two more operations so we can live well into our hundreds.

Until my sixteenth birthday I longed to be pretty, but then something changed. Something which didn’t only change me; it changed the world. This is my story. This is how I fell in love and saved the human race.

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Alana Anderson sat beside her window staring out across the river towards the opposite side of town. She could faintly hear the sound of laughter rippling through the pulsating music that was blaring out of the nearest window. She sighed aloud before adjusting her legs and shifting into a comfier position.

For almost five years Alana had sat on this window sill every night before finally getting into bed. For almost five years she’d longed to turn sixteen and cross the river legally just so she could be at one of the hottest parties in the city. She longed to have her body adjusted so she was perfect; so she was pretty.

Being ugly wasn’t exactly fun, in fact it was quite possibly the worst feeling a person could feel. Living on the ugly side of town wasn’t as fun as when you were first turned into a pretty. If you didn’t look perfect then why should you be able to live a perfect life? This was the side of town where school was compulsory and parties were forbidden. The only thing keeping the rare uglies like Alana entertained, was the tricks they managed to pull off. Tricks that Alana missed almost as much as she wanted to be pretty.

The sound of fireworks glittering into the sky brought Alana out of her thoughts. She stared up into the clear night sky and felt a small smile cross her lips. She briefly remembered the night before her best friend turned sixteen and in that brief moment she decided she needed to get out of her dorm room.

As Alana jumped off of the window sill, she removed the ring that was accustomed to being worn on her middle finger of her left hand. She picked up a bundle of jackets from her floor and shoved them under her duvet, hoping the heat they produced was the same amount that she did whilst sleeping.

The ring that she had just removed wasn’t worn due to routine or fashion. That ring was the equivalent to an ID pass. With it resting on her bedside table no warden or any form of law could tell that she wasn’t going to be sleeping in her bed for a while tonight.

“Goodnight.” Alana said softly, hoping she had masked her excitement.

“Goodnight Alana.” The room replied in it’s robotic voice.

Alana grinned before pulling herself up through her window and out on to the ledge. She dropped to the roof beneath her and stumbled slightly before getting her footing right. Alana smiled to herself, imagining her best friend waiting in front of her. She missed Sinead and the tricks that she’d thought up for the two of them to create.

Shaking the thoughts from her head, Alana jumped up and continued her journey across the rest of the dorm rooms until she reached the lowest point. Counting to three she took a run and jump and felt herself flying through the air. She was far from graceful, but the roof was low enough for her to avoid spraining any of her ankles as she landed.

Letting out the breath she’d been holding whilst scaling the building Alana stood up properly and scanned the area for a sign of hover cars carrying wardens. Seeing that the coast was clear she quickly set off for the river bed.

Ugly town was normally in complete darkness at this time of night, and tonight was the same. If Alana hadn’t spent many nights taking this trip she was sure that she’d have tripped and fell often. But fortunately she arrived at the oldest bridge in the city with not cuts nor any bruises.

Alana had been beneath this bridge tons of times before and she knew through experience that it was the only bridge that wouldn’t tell anyone she had crossed it. The city had only a few buildings and artefacts remaining that they hadn’t built themselves, so the bridge was basically older than the city itself.

Stopping to gaze in the water before her Alana grimaced. Her bedroom only had one mirror and she tried to avoid looking in it as much as she could. Seeing her reflection now made Alana pine for the day she would finally turn sixteen. She hated her flat brown hair and her dissymmetrical face. Her eyes were the closest thing to being pretty as they were so big, but she wouldn’t mind having a shade of violet mixed in with the bright blue.

Pulling her eyes away from the glittering river Alana looked for the rope that was underneath the bridge. She didn’t know how the rope had got there, she only knew it was her only way of getting across the river without being seen.

Getting across the river unseen was the easy part. Normally Alana and her best friend would cross the river together and spy on the pretty people partying on the other side. Tonight, however, Alana was alone and she intended to actually speak to a new pretty. She wanted to find her best friend and be reassured that everything was going to be ok.


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New Post 9/15/2008 5:23 PM
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Re: When I Grow Up [Futuristc Joe Fanfic] 

this is seriously amazing already!
post more soon :D


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New Post 9/15/2008 5:30 PM
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Re: When I Grow Up [Futuristc Joe Fanfic] 

*stares mouth dropped*
Oh that is it I quit writing.
THAT WAS AMAZING!
seriously
I don't just use cap locks for anything.
AMAZING<3


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New Post 9/15/2008 5:33 PM
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Re: When I Grow Up [Futuristc Joe Fanfic] 

that was incredible Sinead.
i absolutely love this already.
post more soon chica please.


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New Post 9/15/2008 5:36 PM
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Re: When I Grow Up [Futuristc Joe Fanfic] 

this is amazing so far i can't wait till you post the next chapter! :)

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New Post 9/15/2008 5:38 PM
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Re: When I Grow Up [Futuristc Joe Fanfic] 

Sinead Why dont you like this?
This was absolutly fantabulous!< and i only use that word on the fanfics that are really amazing!
That was such an amazing beginning!
I cannot wait to read the next part!
Gawsh i so wana be purdy!
But humm i wonder, is joe already a purdy? Or not?
But he is already a purdy! cause hes sexualisious!
Just POST POST POST! More soon cause im dying to see where this goes!

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New Post 9/15/2008 5:40 PM
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Re: When I Grow Up [Futuristc Joe Fanfic] 

Post More Soon.

I <3 It.

It reminds me of the Uglies series.

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New Post 9/15/2008 5:46 PM
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That was great

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New Post 9/15/2008 5:47 PM
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Re: When I Grow Up [Futuristc Joe Fanfic] 

Thank you for all the lovely comments peopleee!!

I love all your enthusiasticness going on haha! I'll try and update tomorrow, maybe. If I'm not tired haha.

Annd it is actually based on the Ugly books. I said it in my audtions but forgot to put that in this thread. So I'll edit that later!

Thanksssss again!!

You all make me smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.


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New Post 9/15/2008 5:49 PM
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Re: When I Grow Up [Futuristc Joe Fanfic] 

I love this!!!! This is truely a work of art!

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