Alright im like a complete and total newbie and i have no clue how this site works :S

Anyways i have a couple of ideas for fanfics and i just thought one up like 10 minutes ago the title of it is Waiting for you to notice me. So im going to post it right here and see what people think of it and stuff. The storyline revolves mainly around Nick Jonas and a girl named Sarah. In this story the Jonas Brothers are not famous YET they are like on the verge of becoming famous like think back to 2006 or possibly around the time of Mandy and mabye even a little bit before that when not many people knew who they were.

Waiting for you to notice me...

Sarah's P.O.V

I just stood there just gawking at him. If he saw me starring at him like this i wonder if he would think of me as a total creeper. I ponderd this thought for a while until i saw him smile. He was mabye 23 lockers down from mine (ok yes i counted to see) and his friends were telling him a joke wich lead to him revealing his amazing smile. Gosh that smile melts my heart into a puddle of goop (arent i the romantic) whenever i see it. And of course who could forget his INCREDIBLE brown eyes. Those chocolate brown eyes that you just want to stare into for hours on end (if you dont already). Oh and dont even get me started on his hair those amazing curls wow! Everything about him is just so wonderfull. As much as i ADORE his good looks i mainly obbsess over him because of his huge heart. This boy is very giving,kind,sweet,gentle,honest,and a geniunly good person. Hes the type of guy who always holds the door open for people even if they are really far behind him. Hes the kind of guy who asks the person who mabye has no friends and is considerd a "loser" to be his partner becuase he cares and knows that nobody likes feeling left out. Hes the type of person who doesnt judge people based on looks. SERIOUSLY he doesnt ive seen him date some girls who arent your steriotypical gorgus and perfect kind of people. they arent stick thin nor do they have perfect skin. these are just a few among the millions of excellent qalitys that the NICK JONAS posseses.  Yep hes a real catch and i am totally crushing on him an-(thought interrupted) OH god hes walking right towards me!!!!

should i continue with this story????