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New Post 9/26/2008 6:53 AM
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Forgotten [one shot] 

Hey everyone! So this is my latest one shot, called Forgotten...starring none other than KRISTA, who is an amazing friend of mine! Lava you lotss! Anywhoo, so one night I decided to write this, cos I felt like writing a one shot and I came up with this...I finally have decided to post it since I got adri & krissy to read it and tell me its actually not as bad as I thought lol. So here it is, enjoy =)

Forgotten

 

Part 1

 

“You may now kiss the bride” Josh said, with a cheeky grin as Kevin pinched his eyes shut along with Krista as they touched lips for a second before pulling back in various shades of pink.

“Okay! You’re married! Weddings over, lets go play!” Josh announced, as he and Ryan ran over to the playground. They were soon joined by Leanne, Fiona and Ray who started a game of tag. Kevin and Krista sat next to each other smiling shyly.

“So…I guess you’re my pretend wife now.” The seven year old said to Krista.

“Yup! I’ll be a good wife, promise.” She said, solemnly to him.

“Are you guys coming?” Ryan yelled, as everyone began to run off.

“Coming!” Kevin called back, brushing himself off. He helped Krista up, and then whispered into her ear. “One day, I’ll make you my real wife.” He said, with a small smile. Krista blushed but looked up at Kevin, her eyes sparkling.

“Really?” She asked. He nodded, with a grin. “Don’t forget.” She said softly, studying his cute face.

“I won’t, promise!” He said pecking her cheek before running off. Krista smiled to herself, one day she’d be in a white dress, not her play clothes, she’d be in a huge church, not a playground and he’d really be hers, till death do them part.

“Wait up!” She yelled out, and ran to catch up with them.

 

As much as the minutes of your life seem to go so slowly, the years can really pass. It was only three years later that Krista’s dad got a job in Los Angeles and she had to move. It was only a few years later that Kevin’s brother Nick got discovered, and soon after that their careers were jump started.

Was a little promise made on that bright Wednesday afternoon forgotten?

 

A 21 year old Krista drove her car down an LA street on the way to her friend’s house. She peered at her phone while she drove, looking up to suddenly see a bright red light blare at her. Flattening her foot on the brakes, her car halted to a stop. She lurched forward as she felt the car behind hit her.

“Oh great.” She said out loud, as she rolled her window down and motioned for the car behind her to pull over to the side. As she parked her car on the curb, she stepped out to view the damage and exchange insurance details with the other driver.

 

Krista walked around to the back, looking at the slight dint in the back of her car. She heard the other driver come up behind her and she heard a deep voice start talking.

“I’m sorry, I wasn’t listening…” She said, turning around, her eyes going wide as she saw him standing in front of her.

She looked him over, he’d certainly grown…taller. Kevin Jonas that boy who’d disappeared from her life 11 years ago, was suddenly standing right in front of her. The years had definitely gone by; she let her eyes glaze over him. He wasn’t some kid in a playground anymore; he was a world famous rock star in five thousand dollars worth of Dior.

“I was just saying the damage isn’t major, so it shouldn’t cost that much.” He said, with a warm smile.

She could hardly believe it; she’d spent the last few years constantly seeing his face on everything, his voice everywhere. How was her pretend husband from the second grade? Did he remember anything about her? More importantly did he remember his promise?

It seemed like a century ago that Josh Dilpat announced them husband and wife in their elementary school playground. They’d spent a years attached to each other, but once she moved, nothing. All was forgotten.

Until one day she stumbled upon them on the internet, she followed their success, watched him grow and grew to love him from afar.

It seemed strange, but it was true and now he was standing in front of her surveying her paint work.

“Look, here are my insurance details anyway.” Krista stated, forcing her eyes to move away from his flawless face.

“Nah, don’t worry I’ll cover it, I should have been at least two car spaces behind you.” He said reasonably. Krista shook her head; he didn’t recognise her at all. In the back of her mind she knew he wouldn’t. The last time they had seen each other, they were both ten and had an elementary school crush on each other.

So innocent and so forgettable.

“Look, I actually have to be somewhere in five minutes, so how about we just cover our own costs then.” He said, looking at his watch.

Krista sighed, as she pulled out a notepad from her purse, no this was her fault, she’d cover his costs, even though he was a millionaire. It hurt knowing he didn’t recognise her, and even though she told herself it didn’t matter, inside it really did.

She sat the notepad down on her car trunk and took a pen out; but before she could ask him for his insurance details he smiled at her.

“Sorry, of course!” He said, automatically taking her pen and signing his name with a flourish. Krista stared at his signature, he’d changed…but then again did she really know him?

She remembered the small boy making her a promise on a school playground, kissing her pink cheek and then running off.

She remembered holding his hand for the rest of the year, as their friendship continued to grow.

She remembered crying as she waved goodbye to him when school ended, knowing she wouldn’t see him anymore.

 

Maybe he’d changed, or maybe that boy was still inside of him…beyond the Dior and signatures.

Krista stared into Kevin’s hazel eyes wondering, and then she did something completely crazy. She leant forward and kissed him, her soft lips brushed against his as his eyes fluttered shut in surprise. Krista pulled back shaking her head, shocked by her actions, but her lips were tingling. Kevin just stared at her in shock, stunned by the kiss. She then took her pen up, and scribbled something on a sheet of the notepad, tearing it off and folding it in half.

“Here, Kevin.” She said quietly, pressing it into his palm, as he still stared at her in shock. She took her notepad and pen and went back into her car and without looking back she drove off.

Kevin watched the beautiful girl drive off, and then he looked at the folded paper pressed in his hand. Still staring into the distance he opened the note and then looked down.

‘You Forgot’

 

 

That is part one, comments are thoroughly enjoyed...I guess I'll post part 2 uber soon lol. Thanks for reading!!!

 

<33 Rebecca


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New Post 9/26/2008 6:58 AM
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Re: Forgotten [one shot] 

you musta been deluded when you thought this wasnt good enough to post.
but I MADE YOU SEE SENSE!! *nods*
because this ROCKS MY SOCKSS!!!
WOOOT.
it is like....THE CUTEST, MOST ADORABLE ONE-SHOT. EVER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and i LOVESS IT MUCHLYY!!!
omgoshh..its like..PERFECT!
i really dont know howwww you could think it was bad.
cos anything you write is GOOD. capital G! =P
even if its like...nonsense...!!! =)

and i think you should just post part 2 RIGHT NOW!
becauseee im sure those people reading it will NOT want to wait impatiently!! sooo...POST IT NOWWW!!!!! NOW BECSTA, NOWWW!! =D

and now that i think about it, and stare at the last 2 words of part 1...did you get inspired by 'Dont Forget'...as in Demi's song? hahahaha. i totally cannot remember when you wrote this, except that ive waited bout a WEEK to read it! yahuhh...

anywhoo....GREAT JOB BECSTA!
I LOVESSS IT! AS MUCH AS I LOVE YOUUU!!!
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New Post 9/26/2008 7:01 AM
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Re: Forgotten [one shot] 

Since you mentioned that, I DID forget to mention that YES I was inspired by Demi's song & album...since I think we dled it around the time I wrote this...but yes if you all haven't bought demi's album GO BUY IT...and I will buy it when it comes out in Australia or maybe I'll order it online who knowss! But yes definitely inspired by Demi's 'Don't Forget' ahahaha I might as well post part 2 now...pfft cbb waiting here it is!

Part 2

 

Kevin stared at the paper, trying to understand the meaning behind the words. He’d forgot? He’d forgotten what?

“Oh god, I forgot.” He said, suddenly. “Krista.” He whispered, staring at the road ahead.

Just as he’d forgotten, he remembered.

He remembered passing notes to her in class, with little love poems written on them.

He remembered hugging her, as she cried when she heard she had to move away.

And he remembered his promise; to one day make her his wife.

It seemed silly to him, that such a promise would still stand after years of not knowing each other, but somehow something made sense to him.

He jumped into his car and sped up the road, his meeting forgotten as he looked around for her red car. Racing up the road, he turned the street corner and saw her car cruising along. He didn’t know what he was doing; common sense went out the window ten minutes ago as he sped up and hit his car again into the back of hers.

 

They both stopped, in the quiet suburban street. He watched as she opened her door and got out, her face confused as she noticed it was Kevin again. He also noticed the tear tracks on her face, and how badly he wanted to make them disappear.

He opened his car door and stepped out, meeting her half way. They stood in silence, just staring at each other. Krista suddenly looked to the ground, feeling awkward, what was he doing?

“Krista…” His voice said roughly. It wasn’t a question, it was a statement. He knew her name. Her head shot up did he…?

“I remember.” Was all he said, before he took her in his arms and never let her go.

 

 

Krista stared into Kevin’s eyes and smiled, as she held his hands. He leant in and they both closed their eyes as they’re lips touched, bringing her hand up to his cheek she smiled as she felt him pull her close, until her body was pressing against his. Slowly pulling back, hearing everyone clapping madly and cheering she smiled and stared into his shining eyes.

“Congratulations.” The minister said, with a smile.

Kevin pressed his forehead against hers, giving her a grin.

“How do you feel now, Mrs Jonas?” He asked his wife. Krista smiled and thought for a moment, it had taken two car crashes to reunite their love. It had taken two years of dating to allow that love to grow, and now they were finally married.

“Like the happiest woman alive.” Krista whispered to him, with a bright smile that lit up Kevin’s heart.

“I love you and I’ll always love you, till death do us part and beyond.” He told her, as he took her hand and they ran down the aisle, together forever and never forgotten.  

 

 

Tis' not that long lol, but i hope you all enjoyed reading it!! Comments are mucho appreciated and well loved! Thanks for reading...and hope you have a uber fantastic night ahahaha!

<33 Rebecca


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New Post 9/26/2008 7:04 AM
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Re: Forgotten [one shot] 

ohhh DO YOU SEE THE POWER I POSSESS AS A HIGH SCHOOL GRADUATE??
that's right...all i gotta do is REPLY to part 1 and insist part 2 be posted...and VOILA! there it is! =P
once again, i must reiterate that this is the most ADORABLE. STORY. EVER. !!!!

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New Post 9/26/2008 7:10 AM
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Re: Forgotten [one shot] 

bahaha, =)
nice job adri! and that is the most amazingly adorable thing i have read in a while
and it brought a little smile to my face and some happiness  =)
and it was a genuine smile might i add becsta.
thankyouuu for this one shot, its just.

=D
hehe.
-krissy


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New Post 9/26/2008 10:24 PM
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bumping! =] Thanks Krissy, happiness is love ahahaha!


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New Post 9/27/2008 12:22 AM
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Re: Forgotten [one shot] 

OK! So my last comment didn't post ... NOT HAPPY!

But I love this! It's so cute! Like, seriously! Amazing! And so like a movie! Love movies! Love you! Love it! And wow! Just ... love it! So sweet ... but part 1 was sad, but part 2 was happy! And yes, miss adriANA has awesome graduate skills! Ha ha! Lava yous!

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New Post 9/27/2008 2:52 AM
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Re: Forgotten [one shot] 

aw that was the cutest thing ever!

i love how you based it around 'Don't Forget'. That song is amazing  =]

I absolutely love your one-shots! They are so unique but they are amazingly written! Is amazingly a word? Eh, it is now!

=]

 


 
New Post 9/27/2008 7:41 AM
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Re: Forgotten [one shot] 

Awhhh! This was one of the uttermost touching fanfictions I've ever read :] I loved the whole playground scene where Krista and Kevin 'married'. So adorable :] Aawhh. Your writing is always so blissful and well structured :] Gawh, great two-shot!

Peace and love;

Loes.



 
New Post 9/28/2008 10:33 AM
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Awww thanks guys! You have NO idea how awesome your comments are!!! BumP!


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