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New Post 9/26/2008 11:58 PM
User is offline sarahh[sonaj]luvsjonas:)
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More Than A Feeling (A Nick FF) 

this is the first FF i've ever written and i'm going to write the prologue, so if you guys think it'll be good, comment and bump and I'll keep on writing as long as you guys keep on reading =D

Prologue

 

            “Nooooo!” I screamed at the top of my lungs. “We have to win this contest!  It’s our only chance to meet Nick…and Joe and Kevin.”

            “I know Elizabeth,” Sharon mumbled in an exasperated tone.

            “We were LATE?!?  We came 10 minutes before 5:30 and they were already judging!” I was so furious, kicking rocks as we made our way back across the alienated parking lot.

            “Liz!  I know ok?  Yes, we didn’t win!  And yes, we have lawn tickets! And yes, that was our one chance to meet them.  But get a hold of yourself ok?! We’re at a Jonas Brothers concert for crying out loud! You know they wouldn’t want us to be angry the entire time we’re here!” Sharon retorted back.

            “Sorry, I was just letting off steam.  I guess you’re right.  Maybe we’ll meet them some other way,” I replied.  How little did I know what the future would behold.

            My name is Elizabeth and my best friend is Sharon.  We absolutely love the Jonas Brothers especially Nick, but I know I’m gonna be the one to marry him!  Well, it’s just a feeling I have.

            Before I go any further with my story, I think I should take you back to the beginning when Sharon and I found out WE could meet the Jonas Brothers.

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Hope everyone enjoyed it! Like I said before, if you like it, comment it.  If you hate it, comment it.  Basically, no matter what, comment it =D i want to know what you think about!

~Sarah

 


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New Post 9/27/2008 12:15 AM
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Re: More Than A Feeling (A Nick FF) 

I never tell someone I hate their fanfic!! I think that is completely rude and disrespectful. I actually think that this'll be kind of cute! I can't wait to see where this goes!


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New Post 9/27/2008 10:47 AM
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Re: More Than A Feeling (A Nick FF) 

aw thx! i meant if they had suggestions on how it could be improved they could tell me but i totally agree on it being rude. 

if i get more comments i'll be sure to post more =D


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New Post 9/27/2008 11:01 PM
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Re: More Than A Feeling (A Nick FF) 

New Reader:) I love it. Seriously post more:D


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New Post 9/27/2008 11:03 PM
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Re: More Than A Feeling (A Nick FF) 

thx. i will seriously update tomorrow =D


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New Post 9/27/2008 11:15 PM
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Re: More Than A Feeling (A Nick FF) 

thx. i will seriously update tomorrow =D


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New Post 9/27/2008 11:18 PM
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Re: More Than A Feeling (A Nick FF) 

Yayyy:D


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New Post 9/28/2008 4:44 PM
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Re: More Than A Feeling (A Nick FF) 

Bump:)


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New Post 9/30/2008 8:08 PM
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Re: More Than A Feeling (A Nick FF) 

Sorry that i didn't update you guys: i had a test to study for and a prject that's due friday so yeah i'll type up chapter 1 in a sec :)


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New Post 9/30/2008 8:16 PM
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Re: More Than A Feeling (A Nick FF) 

hello : )

 

this sounds prettie awesome.

 

ihm, one suggestion. please make it original. there is alot of ffs flying around girls meeting hte boys at a concert. make an original and creative way of making that happen. please & thank you.

 

love.peace.goodbye.

 

ps: check out my new ff: a dixie girl's dream.


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