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New Post 9/28/2008 10:13 AM
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On the Line [ff] 

Ok ... so yes, I formulated this idea walking from Floriade to the city ... random, but whatever! And it wasn't actually inspired by Demi, Jonas duet ... but hey, I guess it works! =D Anyways ... this is thr prologue, exciting, I know! =P

Prologue

Lines. They define our life. Lines separate things, without lines, the world would be a big crazy mess. Like the line between going to far, and only just pushing the boundaries. The line between good and bad. People think I’m bad, the things I do are bad. But I look at it differently, I think I’m good, I’m standing up for all the other kids out there who can’t stand up against their family. But then, there is also the line between love and hate. Maybe you hate someone so much you love them, and it kills you. And then, even the line can’t separate love from hate.

So ... to the very few people who read this -coughadriANAcough- tell me what you think ... xD

-Nicky


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New Post 9/28/2008 10:16 AM
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Modified By adri  on 9/28/2008 8:34:57 AM)

you already KNOW what i think about it miss niCOLA!!!!!
i am PROUD to call you my 'little sister' !!!!! =D *grins widely*
this is sooooooooo AMAZEEEMENT!!
oh yess, it isss!!

and i think you should post that just as AWESOME chapter one asap so everyone else can enjoy it toooo!!!!! =D because its sosososososooooooooooo GOOOOOOD!

lovesss you lots and lotssss!!!
and forever and ever and ever and everrr.....=P

<3 Adri

EDIT: Oh look up there niCOLA m'dear....you're so special that you get my UBER special 2000th post!! =)


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New Post 9/28/2008 10:21 AM
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This will be amazing! I can already tell!

post more soon


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New Post 9/28/2008 10:33 AM
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I LOVE IT! And I can't wait for CHAPTER ONE!!!!! Don't make your main jobro too emo

EEEK amazing, thats all I can say! I love it and its only a prologue ahahahah! MORE MORE!

I can actually ask you to...PMS!

<33 Rebecca


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New Post 9/28/2008 10:35 AM
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Aww! PMS please(:


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New Post 9/28/2008 10:39 AM
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Ok, since adriANA is awesome, I shall post chapter 1 because of the special occasion! And I already have readers ... I feel loved! =]

Chapter 1
Here I was again, on the streets of LA, completely alone. I didn’t mean for things to get out of hand, it just did. My parents didn’t like what I was doing to my life, they didn’t like the fact I wasn’t spending time on my schoolwork, I was just hanging out with friends, being a teenager. I think in my situation, most other girls will yell, and then run off to their rooms. I take a more … angry approach, I yell, I scream, threaten and damage as much property as I can get my hands on. This usually results in my Mum screaming at me to get out of the house and to not come back until I had calmed down. The funny thing is, I can control the anger, it’s not like I just totally lose control, I just enjoy watching my parents being put in their place. I was a rebel … a troublesome child.
A sighed as I ran my hand through my blonde hair and sat on the stairs outside a store, I didn’t know what to do, all of my friends were out of town at a beach house which my parents didn’t allow me to go to. I’d probably just have to crash on the street tonight. I was thinking about my options when I heard that one annoying high pitched squeal.
“OH MY JONAS! IT’S THEM! IT’S THE JONAS BROTHERS!”
I snapped my head up to see a crowd of girls swarm around, what I could only guess to be the boys themselves. I scoffed as I saw the girls pathetically throw themselves, wanting attention, wanting to be the girl that would win their heart. The crowd parted as the boys walked forward, gently pushing girls away, I grinned as I saw my chance to bruise one of the boys’ egos. I subtly stuck my foot out as they walked past where I was sitting, and as I predicted, the poor boy fell flat on his face. I stuffed my fist into my mouth as I tried to stifle the laughter. The curly haired boy looked shocked as he picked himself up and turned to look it me. I thought that was it, I was in for it, he would turn all his fans on me for tripping him, and I would be dead. But instead, he looked up with me, with a look that even melted my hard heart.
“I am so sorry! I should have been more careful, and watched where I was going … I didn’t notice you there! Are you hurt? I’m so sorry!” He kept rambling on, and I just stared at him in shock. This wasn’t the way it was meant to be, he was meant to yell, get angry at me, and I was meant to yell back, get angry, but him in his place.
“No!” I finally managed to blurt out. He stopped mid sentence and just stared at me. “It’s not meant to work this way! Stop trying to act the hero, any sane person can see that this was my fault!”
I tuned to walk away, but he grabbed my hand to stop me. In that moment, that split second, my heart stopped, I couldn’t breathe, I felt like, the World could be falling apart and I wouldn’t care. And I hated this feeling. I pulled my hand from his and turned around to glare at him.
“I don’t want any of your pity! Just leave me alone! You’re not as amazing as you think you are! So just back off!” I was screaming now, not caring about the people looking at me, the death glares I received from his fans. I stormed off, ignoring his called out apologizes. I didn’t realize then, that I was already on the line.
 
Nick’s P.O.V
 
I stared after her in shock, watching her storm off. It look me a second to get myself together before I started calling out to her.
“Look! I’m sorry! I didn’t mean to offend you! I’m really sorry!”
“Dude … what’s her problem? Are you alright Nick?” Joe asked, shaking his head slightly.
I looked down at my hand, which was tingling from her touch. “Yeah … fine …”
It was only then I noticed all the other girls, screaming out to make sure I was okay, promising me they were going to find that girl and make her sorry for what she did. I ran the hand I used to grab hers through my hair, and took a deep breath. This was crazy, how could a girl I just met, he looked like she was ready to kill me, have this effect on me? Maybe it was her blue eyes … her eyes that she used to make you scared, but those same eyes could go through to your soul; make you melt when you looked into them. And her blonde hair, it seemed to turn into electricity while she was yelling, but still looked so soft. She was like no one I had ever met before, and I wasn’t sure I liked the effect she had on me.
“Nick … Nick … hello?” I snapped back to reality as Kevin gently shook my shoulder. “Are you sure you don’t have brain damage or something … that fall looked pretty painful.”
“No, no, I don’t have brain damage! I’m fine!” I only just became aware of the throbbing pain in my forehead.”
“At least you’re not bleeding anywhere, but there will definitely be some bruising …”

I ignored Kevin as he inspected my face for any damage. I was thinking what happened over in my head, had it really been her fault? And what had she meant by it? Did that mean she intentionally tripped me over? I was confused as I thought about everything that happened in less then 5 minutes, the girl, the amazing girl who caused my heart to pound. It was then I released that I wanted her to be mine. I had never wanted anything this much in my life, not even my singing career. And this fact scared me. I had crossed the line, the line into the unknown.

So yes ... I hope you like it! =]

-Nicky


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New Post 9/28/2008 10:44 AM
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and guess what? you're so very special that you get my 1 past 2000 post tooo! =D

CHAPTER ONEE!!
WOOOOT. =D
niCOLA is cooool because she keeps to what she says...that is, posting chapter ONE after becSTA's approval! ehehehez
andandddd..this story is awesomer than awesome! it is like...
wondersomefantabulazing! to the max !!! =)

of coursee you are loved! what is there NOT to love about youuu niCOLA?
the cutest of the cutee! =P
andanddd...that main character is sooo emo, i lovess it! bahahaha.
but pleaseee dont make your favourite subject even more emo just cos u like emo stories.....please?

anywhoo...i would just like to say...
BECSTA! dontt use abbreviations for Post More Soon! when i read it...i TOTALLY just thought of the girlyyyy problems meaning...LOL

butbutt, i LAVAAAAA youuuu niCOLA and methinks you should continue writing more and post asap!

<333


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New Post 9/28/2008 11:13 AM
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That was amazing!!!

Post more soon!


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New Post 9/29/2008 1:36 AM
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Re: On the Line [ff] 

FIRSTLY, i would have liked to have replyed before ADRIANA but shes already done it. grrr, naw i love you adri.

ANYWAY

i applaud you on your original brain cos its the first time ive seen a character like this. it makes it more interesting. is she australian like you orr no?

i guess i will find out soon.    PMS i should say

so   pms. NOW.


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New Post 9/29/2008 1:47 AM
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sneaking on. 
while I finish my homework.
at 12:47 in the morning..
to tell you.
I love this so far. :)

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