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YAY!!!!! I'M STARTING TO GET COMMENTS!!!
And that last one was posted @ 7:05  lol I'm a dork, I know
So, here's the next chapter!!!! Hope you like it!
Chapter 3
“Life sucks.” I was lying on my bed, staring at my newly decorated room, wondering what, exactly, this world had against me. When I went to school this morning, I wasn’t expecting a warm welcome, but these kids were unbelievable.
The second I stepped into that school, I felt like an outsider. I was thrown into a sea of Abercrombie wearing, fake-tanned clones whose favorite saying was “Eh. Ma. GAWD!” There were so many pastel colors and plaid shorts I felt like puking, but figured it wouldn’t make for a great first impression.
As an added bonus to this, I managed to become enemies with the most popular girl in what must be a record five minutes. All I did was walk into homeroom and sit in the nearest empty seat, when suddenly Miss High-and-Mighty gets all up in my face, saying,
“You’re in my seat, freak.” So, of course, I came back at her with the classic,
“Does it have your name on it?” And, let’s just say it didn’t go over with her very well. Come lunchtime, everyone knew me as the creepy new girl, due to some rumor she spread about me, and I was left to eat at the end of an empty table.
Then, every teacher I got gave me, and no one else, at least two hours of homework to finish by tomorrow. Almost two hours per teacher. Seven subjects. Do the math! Apparently, my old school was really far behind Fairfield Prep.
I thought I’d be happy to finally get home, but no. Daddy dearest felt it was necessary to get on my case about not having finished packing yet. How could I possibly be unpacked yet? I’ve only been living here for a week! Obviously, he didn’t think that was a valid excuse, so now I’m confined to my room, which brings us to what I’m doing now.
Singing along to “Take a Breath,” I gazed into the eyes of the owners of these angelic voices. This past week, listening to the Jonas Brothers’ music was all that kept me sane. I spent most of my free time bawling my eyes out to songs like “A Little Bit Longer,” “Underdog,” and “One Day at a Time.” Seriously, these boys were helping me stay alive.
Unfortunately, I couldn’t just lie around, singing with the Jonas Brothers all day. If I didn’t get started on that homework soon, I wouldn’t get done until two. I walked over to my desk and observed the pile of papers sitting there. It had to be at least a foot high! There was no way I was going to finish all this and unpack everything this afternoon; but, if I didn’t, I’d end up with seven angry teachers and one majorly pissed off dad.
I was wallowing in self-pity when I the realization that I could do this all on time hit me. All I had to do was keep it a secret from Dad, which should be fairly easy. No offense, but the man is completely clueless. Closing my eyes, I snapped my fingers twice, and then opened them again.
Slowly, almost as if I thought Dad would come in any second and uncover my secret, I walked towards my largest Jonas Brothers poster. I carefully reached out, lifting it up to reveal a small door that hadn't been there before. Reaching out my hand to turn the knob, I opened the door and walked inside.
Beyond the doorway, there was a large room, about twice the size of my dad's kitchen. It looked like a miniature theater-like one you'd go to to see a Broadway show. The only differences were the size, and that the place where there should have been seats instead contained at least five guitars, a huge couch, a TV, and, of course, a wooden desk with an Apple computer sitting on top of it. Knowing that I should work on my schoolwork before I explored the room, I walked over to the desk, sat down, and got to work.
Eleven hours, three naps, and thousands of words later, I finally finished all of my homework. I sat back in my chair, relishing in the fact that I had nothing left to do. Nothing at all. A few minutes of resting later, I began to feel-well-restless. Even though the room was filled with things to do, I couldn't think of a single one I wanted to do at the moment. At least, not by myself. For the first time in years, I felt lonely. Back before she died, I could always go to Grandma if I wanted to be with someone. Now that she was gone, I had no one to go to.
Against my will, a tear began to slide down my cheek. I hated crying. Not only did it show everyone how weak I could be, once I started, I couldn't stop. The tears flowed more freely now, making dark spots where they landed on my jeans. At that moment, I needed someone more than ever before.
"If only the Nick Jonas were here," I murmured wishfully. It was a stupid wish, but I couldn't help myself-having him here would be perfect. He seemed so sweet and funny on TV and in interviews. If anyone could make me feel better, it would be Nick. Too bad I was never going to meet him. But then again...
My eyes lit up when I thought of the idea. Sure, it might be a little risky, but I was desperate. Nothing was going to change my mind at that moment. I closed my eyes and snapped my fingers twice. When I opened them back up, thirteen year old Nicholas Jerry Jonas was standing before me.
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BUMPITY BUMP BUMP, BUMP BUMP!!!!!!
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hey caitlin. look who's here!! ME! isn't that AWESOME??!!??!! lol.
oh. my. freaking. god. CAITLIN U R A FREAKISHLY AMAZING WRITER AND I AM SORRY I NEVER COMMENTED BEFORE NOW!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!! OHMYGOD NOT KIDDING!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AMAZING!!!!
post more soon. plz? i'm ALREADY dying 2 hear more. U NO U WANT 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol. PS: nice names. they're a bit odd, but pretty at the SAME TIME!! and lol, i LUV the name Juliet. ;D
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Kylie{Why can't you see that you belong with me?} wrote
hey caitlin. look who's here!! ME! isn't that AWESOME??!!??!! lol.
oh. my. freaking. god. CAITLIN U R A FREAKISHLY AMAZING WRITER AND I AM SORRY I NEVER COMMENTED BEFORE NOW!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!! OHMYGOD NOT KIDDING!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AMAZING!!!!
post more soon. plz? i'm ALREADY dying 2 hear more. U NO U WANT 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol. PS: nice names. they're a bit odd, but pretty at the SAME TIME!! and lol, i LUV the name Juliet. ;D
AWWWWWWW, THANKS KYLIE!!!!!!!!!!!
Now I have this big goofy smile on my face and I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. lol, I'm a dork
I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as I can, but mom's on a cleaning rage and we're all packing for a cruise next week, so I don't know when I'll be able to post it...
And I LOVE the name Juliet! Whenever I think of an idea for a fanfic, I always think of the girl as "Juliet." It's all because of Taylor Swift's song "Love Story." LOVE THAT SONG!!!!!!!!
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Caitlin Jonas-{I didn't know him, but now I never will} wrote
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hey caitlin. look who's here!! ME! isn't that AWESOME??!!??!! lol.
oh. my. freaking. god. CAITLIN U R A FREAKISHLY AMAZING WRITER AND I AM SORRY I NEVER COMMENTED BEFORE NOW!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!! OHMYGOD NOT KIDDING!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AMAZING!!!!
post more soon. plz? i'm ALREADY dying 2 hear more. U NO U WANT 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol. PS: nice names. they're a bit odd, but pretty at the SAME TIME!! and lol, i LUV the name Juliet. ;D
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AWWWWWWW, THANKS KYLIE!!!!!!!!!!!
Now I have this big goofy smile on my face and I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. lol, I'm a dork
I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as I can, but mom's on a cleaning rage and we're all packing for a cruise next week, so I don't know when I'll be able to post it...
And I LOVE the name Juliet! Whenever I think of an idea for a fanfic, I always think of the girl as "Juliet." It's all because of Taylor Swift's song "Love Story." LOVE THAT SONG!!!!!!!!
don't worry, i'm ALSO a dork. :) it's fun being retarted, isn't it? lol
uh-oh. a mom on a cleaning rage. that is NEVER a good thing. like, NEVER EVER!! and i am jealous of u! god, go on a cruise without me. >P jk. sounds like fun. :D
ok, fine. just as long as u write something while ur gone!!!!
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New reader!
I absolutely <3 this!
Pms :)
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HEY!!!!!!! Thanks so much for the awesome comments!
Here's chapter 4!
CHAPTER 4
I've always been a very independent person. I've never really opened up to anyone, or let anyone into my life. However, when I looked into Nicholas Jerry Jonas' eyes, I felt myself wanting to tell him everything. There was something about him - maybe the fact that he was so young and innocent looking - that made me feel like completely pouring my heart out to him. I wanted him to know everything about me, to tell him everything I'd been keeping locked up these past few days. For the first time in my life, there was nothing I wanted more than for Nick to see me at my weakest.
Unfortunately, that would have to wait. Having a complete stranger throw themself at you is weird enough, but magically appearing in a strange room and then having a complete stranger throw themself at you? Yeah, not the best way to make a first impression. Before I could even come close to that, I'd have to explain why, exactly, Nick was here, and he still had yet to realize where he was.
"No, Joe, you CANNOT borrow my socks. I don't care if Coco slobbered all over yours, if I let you wear them, I'll never get them ba-" Ah, there we go. Nick's eyes widened in disbelief as he saw that he was no longer arguing with Joe. "Wh-wh-where-bu-bu-bu-but-h-how...? Oh, man, this isn't good." Eyes growing bigger with each step, he turned around, surveying the room. Just when I thought they couldn't get any larger, Nick's eyes landed on me. He jumped, eyes nearly popping out of his head. "AHHHHHHHH!"
I couldn't help it. Despite the fact that it wasn't the thing to do when you first meet someone, I burst out laughing. The fact that Nick kept staring at me with this horrified expression just egged me on even more. When I finally gained enough composure to speak, I gasped,
"Gosh, Nick, I know I'm not the prettiest girl in the world, but am I really that awful looking?" Realizing that I wasn't some creep who was out to kill him or something, Nick relaxed the slightest bit, even managing to let out a nervous giggle.
"So... I'm Nick," he said hesitantly.
"I kn-er, I'm Fotini. Nice to meet you Nick." Nice save, Nini, nice save. I knew I was going to have to explain everything to him sooner or later, but I was trying as hard as I could to make it later.
"Yeah. Nice to meet you, too." His eyes wandered around the room, obviously trying to think of something to say. His gaze landed on my face again, his expression turning to one of concern.
"Um, are you okay? 'Cause it looks like you've been crying." Just then, I realized that my face must be all red and puffy from my sob fest before. Even the slightest bit of crying would do that to me.
"Uh, yeah, I guess I was..."
"Why?" I must have looked upset, because Nick quickly added, "I mean, you don't have to tell me if you don't want to, you know, 'cause we just met and all... I'm sorry, I shouldn't have asked you that. You're obviously upset about it, and probably don't want to talk about it. Even if you did, you wouldn't want to talk about it to me. We just met! Gosh, I'm really sorry. I just wasn't thinking-"
"Nick. First off, you're rambling. Do you always do that?" A scarlet blush crept up his neck.
"Nah, just when I'm nervous..."
"Hmm. Makes sense, I guess. Second, it's fine that you asked. Really, don't worry about it. Believe it or not, I'd rather talk about my problems to someone I don't know well than to someone I do know."
"Oh. Good. I thought you were going to be mad at me or something."
"So, do you still want to know why?"
"Uh, sure, I guess, that is, if you're okay with it. I wouldn't want to make you do anything you don't want to. If you want to wait a little bit, I'm fine with that, or if you don't want to talk about it, that's fine, too. You don't have to tell me just 'cause I asked you-"
"Nick?"
"I'm rambling again, aren't I?" The blush returned, this time a few shades darker than before.
"Kinda." A small smile appeared on my face. There was something so likable about Nick, I couldn't help but love him.
"Oh. Sorry. Again. I'm just getting nervous, for some reason. This doesn't always happen, so I'm not sure why it's happening now, but-you know what? I'm just going to shut up and let you talk now."
"Okay, well, then, here goes..."
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"Wow." By the time I finished, tears were streaming down my face once again. Hesitantly, as if he still wasn't sure if I'd bite or not, Nick pulled me into an awkward hug. The fact that he had just met me, but was being nicer than anyone other than Grandma had ever been to me, caused me to sob even harder.
"Shhh... It's okay, Nini, it's okay." We sat there for a few minutes until I was calm enough to talk to him. I lifted up my head and looked into his eyes. It looked like later had finally come.
"Thanks, Nick."
"Er, no problem."
"So. I guess you want to find out why you're here."
YAY I GOT TO WRITE ABOUT NICKY-BOO!!!!!! He's just too cute, isn't he? And I am DIGGING that blue font!!!!!!!!
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-Caitlin
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i is here!!! heehee!!
i LOVE THIS STORY SO FRIGGIN MUCH I THINK I'M GONNA BURST!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol.
but i'm confuzzled. why didn't nick completely freak, scream, and run around the room going crazy out when he saw that he was talking to some random girl? i mean i no I would. but that's just me. :)
but again i must say..... WOOHOO!!! CAITLIN SCORES AGAIN ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER!!!
lol. hyper, much? (it was a half day at school today. :D)
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Kylie{Why can't you see that you belong with me?} wrote
i is here!!! heehee!!
i LOVE THIS STORY SO FRIGGIN MUCH I THINK I'M GONNA BURST!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol.
but i'm confuzzled. why didn't nick completely freak, scream, and run around the room going crazy out when he saw that he was talking to some random girl? i mean i no I would. but that's just me. :)
but again i must say..... WOOHOO!!! CAITLIN SCORES AGAIN ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER!!!
lol. hyper, much? (it was a half day at school today. :D)
ooooooooo, we had a half day today too!!!!!!!!!! for conferences!!!!!!!
*baby, that's just me. I'm not a supermodel, I still eat McDonald's, baby, THAT'S JUST ME!!!* lol your comment reminded me of La La Land... And I didn't want Nick to completely freak out, cause... well... I dunno, I just think since he's the calm, quiet one of the group, he'd handle something like this better than Kevin or Joe would. Believe me, if it was Joe, I would've had him run around the room screaming and break the computer or something. Ah, Joey-bear...
THANKS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!! I'M ALL HAPPYFUL NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm really starting to get into this, cuz Nicky-boo is here, so I get to write about him and all his studmuffin-ness! I probably won't be able to post till week after next, but I'm gonna try and write at least two chapters while I'm gone!!!!!!!
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THAT was AMAZING. :D
i like this a lot. :]
post more asap!
and you also inspired me with the Slide thinger. :D
lolz. i was bored. tee hee.
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