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 10/30/2008 9:36 PM
 
 Modified By Ginny [with liberty and Jonas for all] West  on 10/30/2008 7:36:57 PM

Ok, so it's short...sorry, but here is a new chapter...

Chapter 10:

“Alright,” She said, wiping her hands free of grease. “Here’s the low-down on your car. You burned out the radiator. You also had a blown head gasket. I’ve given both a temporary fix, cause it’s not like we keep ’68 Mustang parts here on the off chance you’ll be driving through. But she’ll get you back to LA. Or, depending on how long you’re planning on being unreachable from your brothers, she should make it to a nearby big city so you can get the parts she needs.”
“So, that’s it?” I felt like…I dunno what I felt like, but it felt like a good time for letting out a really big sigh. So, I did. She looked at me funny, but handed me some papers. “And this is?”
“Your bill.” She smiled. I flipped through the paperwork, not really paying attention, that is, not until I saw the final total…$4,972.68. I couldn’t believe it…for a temporary fix?!?!?!?!?!?! I looked back and forth between Zee and the papers I held in my hand.
“What the hell is this?” I couldn’t help getting mad. For the almost thirty hours I’d known Zee, I felt myself falling for her. 
“It’s…”
“It’s a freaking rip off, that’s what it is!!! I can’t believe it! Do you charge everyone this much, or just me cause you know I can afford it???” I snatched my wallet from my jeans and grabbed the first credit card I came across. I thrust it at her. She wore a look that crossed somewhere between being surprised and being hurt. Well, I was the one hurt. I’d been too busy enjoying myself that I’d ignored the signs that I was obviously nothing but a business transaction to her.
She ran my card, I signed the paperwork, and took the keys to my car, all without a single word spoken between the two of us. And with that, I took off, and headed home.
 
 
The drive back to LA was pretty uneventful. If you consider that I panicked with every little sound my car made, thinking it…er-she was going to collapse on me again. Don’t get me wrong, it’s not that I didn’t have faith in Zee’s work. I did. I just didn’t feel like having to give up my last arm and leg for another car bill.

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 10/30/2008 9:42 PM
 

wow. that was. . unexpected... i thought they were gonna be all lovey dovey and get together. guess not. lol awesome chappie. im gonna go to bed coz i am knack.ered. just got back from a halloween party at vivas nightclub. i changed my name again btw lol. see it? night night ginny. i promise ill update on my ff tomorrow!

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 10/30/2008 9:44 PM
 

alexis♥ wrote

LJ, (looks at screen name)... You don't love me? =( Hahahah just kidding =P

Bump Grandma Ginny!  How was your field trip? =)

oh. i just noticed.. its not fit it all on... oh :( sorry.. you are on there lol ill fix it xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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 10/30/2008 9:48 PM
 
 Modified By Ginny [with liberty and Jonas for all] West  on 10/30/2008 7:48:51 PM

The field trip...ahhhhh

So the trip was to take a group of eighth graders to the local art museum.  Well, during lunch break, a couple of the girls in the class decided it would just be totally awesome if they let the boys in the class sign their breasts.  Fun fun FUN. *insert eye-roll here*

I swear, my 4-year old students are more mature than this...UGH


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 10/30/2008 9:51 PM
 

OH OH OH, WHAT HAPPENED THERE? Maybe it was all just a misunderstanding and Nick's an idiot? Did he read the bill wrong? Ah well, guess I'll have to wait a little bit longer before they get it own. Hahaha.

Greatness.


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 10/30/2008 9:52 PM
 

WHAT THE?!?!?!? That's craaaazy!!!

Oh man, what's going to happen next?!?

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 10/30/2008 9:54 PM
 

Ginny [wants to ride the bull at the rodeo] wrote

The field trip...ahhhhh

So the trip was to take a group of eighth graders to the local art museum.  Well, during lunch break, a couple of the girls in the class decided it would just be totally awesome if they let the boys in the class sign their breasts.  Fun fun FUN. *insert eye-roll here*

I swear, my 4-year old students are more mature than this...UGH

UGH. I can imagine a bunch of girls giggling and twirling their finger in their hair. What is wrong with kids today?

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 10/30/2008 9:55 PM
 

louisa-loves-joe-x Read Ginny's One-Shot. Holy Water. She's Amazing--Love you Ginny *&&* Ashley *&&* wrote

 alexis♥ wrote

LJ, (looks at screen name)... You don't love me? =( Hahahah just kidding =P

Bump Grandma Ginny!  How was your field trip? =)

 

oh. i just noticed.. its not fit it all on... oh :( sorry.. you are on there lol ill fix it xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I'm just kidding, you don't have to change it =)

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 10/30/2008 9:59 PM
 

alexis♥ wrote

 Ginny [wants to ride the bull at the rodeo] wrote

 

The field trip...ahhhhh

So the trip was to take a group of eighth graders to the local art museum.  Well, during lunch break, a couple of the girls in the class decided it would just be totally awesome if they let the boys in the class sign their breasts.  Fun fun FUN. *insert eye-roll here*

I swear, my 4-year old students are more mature than this...UGH

 

UGH. I can imagine a bunch of girls giggling and twirling their finger in their hair. What is wrong with kids today?

Totally...what the fudge is wrong with kids???  Man, if I ever did something like that, I'd have been in some serious shiit when I got home.  AGH.


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 10/30/2008 10:27 PM
 

Eighth grade? isn't that our Year Nine? Aren't those kids like... 13, 14? What the hell is wrong with the world!? OH THOSE DESENSITISED YOUNG 'UNS. Seriously, man. I'm so glad I'm not that age anymore. It's insane. Plus, I was a total dork back then. *shudder* I definitely prefer my red hair to my brown/blonde hightlights (bad highlights, I might add...)

Seriously, though. I'm in my final year of high school and our HS starts at Year Nine (so 8th Grade) and they're all bloody pains, they are! They think that, just because they're not in middle school anymore and they're in high school, they can just go about disrespecting anyone. The other day, some random kid came up to me and proper gurned in my face. I just pushed him over and carried on walking. Haha. I'm a terrible example setter for a sixth form student. BUT STILL. Stupid kids.


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