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 11/15/2008 3:32 AM
 
 Modified By Zudit  on 1/4/2009 8:49:24 PM

The coroner will find ink in my veins and blood on my typewriter keys.  ~C. Astrid Weber

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Justice gaped as we pulled up in front of our new home. “You get 3 million dollars and all your buy is this dump in the middle of podunk no where and an Indian?” he cried indignantly, “What is this?”

 

“Three stories of Victorian-style gorgeous,” I replied, shutting off the little red Indian motorcycle’s engine and pulling off my helmet. I watched as Justice pulled his off as well and clambered clumsily out of the sidecar.

 

“Next time you write a best seller, I get to pick where we move,” Justice argued and I laughed, agreeing. 

 

The house rose up, unpainted and weathered, into the air. It had been on the market for at least ten years and it was beginning to show. The porch sagged; the door was wide open, inviting us in.

 

Justice and I had been best friends since we were kids. We had dated in high school before we both decided it was way too weird and broke up on good terms. He’d been my best friend, my brother. We’d traveled almost everywhere together, shared crappy apartments and lofts. He’d gone to work and paid the rent while I sat at my grandmother’s Eldorado typewriter and wrote crappy novels.

 

And then one day last year, it happened-- I wrote a good novel. It wasn’t heavy-handed, it wasn’t overly clichéd, it was beautiful and the publishing world had WWE-style smack down fights for it.

 

Okay, so that’s a hyperbole, but you get my point.

 

I got an agent, a publishing deal and suddenly I was making J.K. Rowling look like the peasant of the publishing world. People were calling me the female Hemingway. As a point of reference, I really, really love this nickname.

 

Now, Justice and I were standing in front of our new home. The one that I was paying for this time. It was smooth sailing and storybook endings for the both us from there on in. Unbeknownst to me, and as if to christen my new fairytale life, they were about to come walking into my life.

 

But that’s a cliché.

 

 

 

So, I noticed recently in my noveling (word?) that I can be incredibly heavy-handed. So this is my shot at me not being heavy-handed & just being...simple. Also, fair warning, the main character is essentially me.


Zudit's Writing a
The coroner will find ink in my veins and blood on my typewriter keys.
~C. Astrid Weber
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 11/15/2008 6:09 AM
 

This sounds really ineteresting, Zudit, I'd like to see how you pull off a Self-Insertion.

I'm wondering who they really are are. xD Er... yeah. -crosses fingers-

pms? :] y.





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 11/15/2008 7:48 AM
 

Oooh! Me like. =] And DARN, I need to go comment Love Bug. I keep forgetting. I have such a horrific memory.


-Katie (PM: FantasyParade)




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 11/15/2008 1:07 PM
 

FantasyParade [Love is not to be trivialised] wrote

Oooh! Me like. =] And DARN, I need to go comment Love Bug. I keep forgetting. I have such a horrific memory.

Do it! Do it so I have motivation to write it!

Also for those who've read both my novels and my fanfics, I'd be really interested in your opinion on my heavy=handed-ness and any suggestions you might have to offer.


Zudit's Writing a
The coroner will find ink in my veins and blood on my typewriter keys.
~C. Astrid Weber
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 11/15/2008 1:22 PM
 

ohh!!! i like can't wait to read more!!!

~sarah


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 11/15/2008 1:26 PM
 

THIS IS AMAZING!!

YOU ARE SO AMAZINGLY (?) TALENTED!!

PMS!!


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 11/15/2008 2:09 PM
 

LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You} wrote

THIS IS AMAZING!!

YOU ARE SO AMAZINGLY (?) TALENTED!!

PMS!!

Liar!


Zudit's Writing a
The coroner will find ink in my veins and blood on my typewriter keys.
~C. Astrid Weber
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 11/15/2008 2:12 PM
 
 Modified By Zudit  on 12/14/2008 10:22:29 PM

A storm outside pelted the house in fat raindrops, thunder rumbled ominously in the distance.

 

I chose a room with peeling yellow wallpaper and a window over looking the fabulous view of the fields. The tarnished frame had already sat in the middle of the room and I had happily my mattress placed there.

 

I sat cross-legged on the bed with just me, the typewriter, and Jim Croce on the record player. Between my legs was balanced a box of Kix cereal (kid-tested, mother-approved) that I periodically stuck my hand into and pulled out fistfuls of whole grain goodness to shovel into my mouth.

 

The Ting Tings was blasting down the halls from Justice’s room. Definitely not the most manly music in the world, but acceptable because it’s Justice. What isn’t acceptable was the stereo being at max. “Oy!” I shouted, pounding on the walls, “Breadwinner can’t win bread with you blasting that junk!”

 

“It’s not junk! They’re very talented!” Justice shouted back, turning the music up louder. G-d knows I love the guy like my brother, but some days I just wanted to wring his neck. I pounded on the wall and turned up my record player. From the other side of the wall, Justice turned up his music.

 

I growled, “Fine! You can pay the mortgage then!” I shouted. The music volume went down again in victory.

 

In the slightly quieter atmosphere followed our short-lived Music War to End All Music Wars I heard pounding. At first, I thought it was Justice, mocking my weak wall pounding, but soon recognized it as coming from another part of the house. Curiously, I crawled off my bed and padded into the hallway.

 

The hallway was dark as I walked slowly towards the stairs. A flash of lightening lit the corridor and I screamed to see a figure standing next to me. Clutching my chest, I attempted to swallow the numerous vital organs that had just jumped into my throat. “Justice, you scared the bejeezus out of me.”

 

“Do you hear that?” he asked. We both stood still, listening to the pounding. “Someone’s at the door.”

 

We both rushed down the stairs and threw open the ancient door. There, on the porch, dripping wet and looking all the world like lost puppies, stood three boys.

 

“C-can we come in?”

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So, I'm disallowing myself from writing any of my novels today. Which is sorta like its own special form of torture for me. But if I don't take a break, then I will utterly destroy any sense of beauty in the prose and subtlity entirely.


Zudit's Writing a
The coroner will find ink in my veins and blood on my typewriter keys.
~C. Astrid Weber
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 11/15/2008 2:21 PM
 

Zudit wrote

 LAYLA ANN.....{It's Like Catching Lightning, The Chances of Finding Someone Like You} wrote

 

THIS IS AMAZING!!

YOU ARE SO AMAZINGLY (?) TALENTED!!

PMS!!

 

Liar!

EXCUSE ME!!

LOL

JK

BUT SERIOUSLY YOU ARE AMAZING

and tha last chappie

....kinda creepy

but good LOL

PMS!!

mucho love

-Carlie


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 11/15/2008 2:31 PM
 

I liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiked it. So who are these three young men? Hmmm... Let me think about that... HAhaha.


-Katie (PM: FantasyParade)




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