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When I Let Go || Two Updates : 3/19 
Modified By anonymous  on 3/19/2008 9:19:54 PM)

 

The Broken Story
 

                It never should have happened. I never should have allowed it. Now, it did. This was it. My chance to take off and fly. Instead, I stayed on the ground . Now, I should have flown. Because as soon as you fly, your ground is ripped apart, but there is no need to worry. But, if you have chosen the road I did, you’re foundation falls as the ground falls. Then, you do the closest thing to flying. You Let Go. You fall, and here is no bottom. You hit rock bottom, but never stop falling. The only way to stop falling is if something catches you. But it depends what catches you. Help, or Death.

Should I Continue?

 
New Post 3/18/2008 9:26 PM
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Wow thats really.......good i love it a lot.

but another thing i was walmart looking at the cd's because my friend asked me to pick up this one cd and i saw barlowgirl, and i was like thats the band that Ashlyn Taylor likes.

And when i picked it up my mom likes whos that band and i was like idk but i think i wanna buy there cd, but i didnt have any money to buy it but next time!

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New Post 3/18/2008 9:29 PM
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ohmigosh ashlynn taylor. that was soooo frickin awesome. haha. im speechless. whoa. i mean like whoa. it was so deep and yet. you could relate to it. and there was that mystery side you love to put in it. and of course we cant forget the drama. lol. well please conntinue. ily! xoxo!!

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Ashlynn.

you MUST continue this.

It's amazing,awsomely well written.

 


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New Post 3/18/2008 9:48 PM
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OMG!!

yes yes continue please =( *puppy dog face*

can't wait to read

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duuuuuuuuude..  post more like.. right this second...  oh, and also mend this heart. =D


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I love you gals!

xP

Well, Maybe after like a few comments, I'll update

OK, OK, I need to finish re-writing something for schoold =D

 
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aww. i luv you too. haha. well i cnat wait for that update. and i should be doing something for school too. but i thhink it can wait. but your update cant. please update like right now! ily! xoxo!!

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post more now like now......come on im dying here jk post more soon!!!


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The Beginning of Her End
                She sat alone on the bench. The pouring rain made her blonde hair damp, and her silver eyes were closed. The mascara flowed down her eyes, leaving a black streak on her cheek. Her nose was red, showing that she had been crying. Her lips occasionally twitched, trying not to cry again. Because she fears something. She fears if she cries that first tear, the tears will not stop raining down. People had told her to Stand in the Rain, and to stand her ground. But they had no idea how hard it was to stand up when it was all crashing down.
                She felt lost in her own world. It was moving far too quickly, causing her to have to run to keep up. Her priorities were mixed up. She was running quickly. She was running a hundred miles an hour, in the wrong direction.
                The steeples at her school were filled with hatred. They were judgmental. Not being able to see past the scarlet leather she was adorned with.
                Can anybody see this girl? Can anybody see that she might not come to school tomorrow? Can anybody see that today was her last day? Not in school, not in some program.

                Can anybody see that she is going down today?

 

 

Songs that were used in the prolouge:

Let Go - Barlowgirl

 

Songs used in this chapter:

Stand in the Rain - Superchick

Suddenly - Superchick

Can Anybody See Her? - Casting Crowns

 
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