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 6/27/2009 5:31 PM
 
 Modified By nickjoeandkevin=♥  on 7/13/2009 3:17:33 PM

Chapter 1

      "Kristen, time to wake up. You got to go to school." I heard my mom say as she opened the shade in my room. I held my right hand up to my eyes where the sun was blinding me. "Fine, fine I'll get up." I said walking to the closet to find something to wear. I didn't have a lot and to must people I was not perfect and even though no one is, in my school there's a lot of people close to it. All the girls got the looks, got the grades, got the popularity everything. I have one friend who is my BFF, Lily and my sister Becky. Becky well is one of them who has everything she's a little younger then I am. She is 14 while I'm a senior at Burkesville High. Sometimes it seems like perfectsville high.

      My BFF, Lily is a little better then I am. Ok a whole lot better but like unlike anyone else here, she's a nice person so we clicked the first day here.
 

*Flashback*

      "Hey." I heard someone come up and tap my back don't tell me another preppy, popular person. I turned around. She was a pretty girl with long curly blonde hair and blue eyes she had a black and pink polka- dotted dress and black leggings. "Hi." I replied. Trying to sound at least unfriendly but it didn't help. "May I help you?" "Oh I just seen you getting picked on by everyone else today and I feel bad. Wanna be friends?" She flashed me a smile and hesitated for a few minutes. "Sure." I replied. "Oh and my names Lily." She said. "Nice to meet you, I'm Kristen." "Ok cool see you tomorrow."

*end of flashback*

      That was the begginning of a great friendship. I made my way down the stairs. To find my mom, my dad, Becky, and her new boyfriend Danny at the table. I felt wicked bad for him because she had to follow every order she wanted and obey to every word she said while half the time, he didn't even pay attention! Ha! I chowed down a quick bowl of cereal and milk and ran into the crisp winter morning to my silver car and went in to pick up Lily.  She only lived down the street and her car was getting fixed so instead of her suffering by walking in the freezing cold lte January morning, I'd pick her up. I knocked at the door and she answered it, ready to go. Then we drove off to Burkesville High.

       We just waited inside until someone tapped me on the shoulder. Who would want me no one else talked to me but it was my music teacher, Ms.Munroe, who wanted to speak with me. "Oh great." I mouthed to Lily as I went with her.  I walked into the classroom with posters of great musicians from our time and hers. "So what I wanted to talk to you was about a record deal! Congradulations, Kristen you are signed!" 

So what do ya think? Let me know?? 


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 6/27/2009 6:16 PM
 

A record deal? For real? oh man......that is incredible!!!

awww sounds like Lily and I are super close bff's...which is great...a girl needs a bff.

can't wait for more!!!!

--Kirsten


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 6/27/2009 6:30 PM
 

thanks! I'll update when i get a few more comments!


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 6/27/2009 8:08 PM
 
is this enough comments
for you to post
because if it is you should
thanks for the part by the way
i was so excited
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 6/27/2009 9:23 PM
 

nice. :D


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 6/27/2009 10:49 PM
 
oooo lucky!!!
a record deal?? wooooot woooot
awesome chapter!
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 6/27/2009 10:52 PM
 

Chapter 2

Just then I sat their with my mouth wide open in shock. "Ms. Munroe you have got to be kidding me." She just simply shook her head. "I'll call your parents today to make arrangements see you later." She opened the door and went back to tell Lily.

"Lily, guess what?" I said scaring her as she sat there on the wooden bench looking at the floor. "Ahhh Kirsten you scared me what?" "Come here." "I got a record deal." I whispered shortly. She gave me a hug that seemed to last forever and then the bell rang saying that we should go to homeroom, which we have together.

As we headed down the hall swiftly to Mr.Knight's room we talked. "I can't believe it. This is wonderful! Of all the years saying you were'nt perfect." Then as she said that, Aimee walked by. "Her becoming perfect?" I don't think so." "Well what if you were getting a record deal?" I said. Her jaw dropped instantly and I seen her pang of jealousy just then Becky walked by and many people stared. "Just keep it quiet will ya?" I asked Aimee. "Oh sure Kirsten." She said with a sly smile coming across her face. I'm sure this won't keep a seceret for too long.

*that night at super*

"So Kirsten Ms. Munroe called." My mom began. "Thinking something went wrong again..." I rolled my eyes. EVERYBODY thought I wasn't perfect sometimes. "So I picked up the phone and she said you got a record deal. Your father and I were so surprised and happy that we got to move to Hollywood!!" "Really?!" I said happily. "What??" Said Becky. "I can't leave now." I began to laugh and she looked at me. "Now Kirsten why don't you go call Lily." "Ok." I said with a sigh of relief. Pulling my brown staright hair out of my baby blue eyes, I picked up the phone. It went to the answering machiene and just quickly left a message.

*JB's POV* 

*Joe's POV* 

"Ok guys this is the girl your gonna help record with." "Wow." I said. "Pretty." "Joeseph..." Dad said back onto the subject. Nick and Kevin put their phones away from texting there friends or should i say crushes Ashley and Jordyn. So she's moving here pretty soon and guy's just make her feel comfortable." "Of course dad." We said. "Oh and Joe and Kevin let her meet your little ladyfriends please." Dad said like knowing they were the ones for them or something. Maybe after I meet her, I will find the one.


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 6/27/2009 11:21 PM
 

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 6/27/2009 11:43 PM
 
shweeeeeet.
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 6/28/2009 3:53 AM
 

wow i still can't get over the whole record deal thing

and getting to work with JB.....

man can this just be my real life now please?

hehe update soon!!

 


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